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The Primordial Memory
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very interesting plotline. a must read for me
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dont drop it continue doing amazing job dont let down people who enjoy your novels dont drop it mateeeeebgggggggggggggggbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
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You know it's good when it's made by Perverted Fella..................................................................................
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I will start of by saying, you're doing great writing a story and it's not an easy job. You have succeeded in doing it. Congratulations !!The quality of wiritng is good and had good scope to become an even better writer in the future.The story development in each chapter is slow but very informative and very needed to get the insight of the story, hence I loved it !! Causing impatience means readers are eager to know more about this story.The character designing is coming up well, interestingly and sort of makes a reader keep reading further to know more, but getting to the point was a bit dragged that in between some paragraphs I found myself skimming through to know what it is. But worth it, the mysterious feeling which makes me wanna know more unable to stop, it already a success .Updating I have to say a but slow since it's only updated twice in a week, I wonder if people would see the novel and reme to read it if it lies unnoticed. Maybe that could be improved.The world background. Am applauding.  It's perfect and simply marvellous. You have a wonderful insight about things you are wiritng and it gets to the reader well. With the descriptions I could see everything in my head as i read. Congratulations, you're a writer with a future. Keep going and try updating regularly.  Fighting !
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So far, I really like it. It have human experimentation ,reincarnation, superhuman mc, and a mc who wants to live simply. it's   that I am not really into dark webnovels but this webnovel got me hooked. For some reason I kinda feel like something is missing? I don't know what but can the author try just once to find it.
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So he complied. This is how they first learned they could take others abilities. But it came
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Of course, since they thought I didn't have any fighting power, they left me aside, but the Prince thought that since I was so strong they already decided on me.
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The doctor passes the newly born baby girl to an old maid of the Second Wife's Palace named Lilian. As Lilian quickly escapes the Second Wife weakly says to her, "don't abandon the baby… please… leave her somewhere safe…"
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hana sensei terus menggoda guru pirang ini dan, guru pirang ini selalu menjawab dengan panik dan gelisah, menjadi hana sensei lebih terus menggodanya. disisi lain ryu di abaikan, bahkan mereka tidak tau ada ryu disitu, dan ryu pun tidak peduli dengan mereka, dia menggunakan skill invisibility, yaitu menghilang seperti stealth. stealth berbeda dengan invisibility. stealth adalah kemampuan dari assassin dan mereka harus berjalan perlahan bersatu dengan alam dan mengecilkan suara detak jantung dan nafas makanya kemampuan stealth lebih ampuh dari invisibility. sedangkan invisibiliy adalah skill yang hanya menyembunyikan seluruh tubuh saja, dan menggunakan sedikit mana. dan juga jika kalian memfokuskan ke orang yang menggunakam invis, kita masih bisa melihat orang itu seperti bunglao. memang simple, tapi invisibility bisa di kombinasi kan dengan sihir terbang. bayangkan jika ratusan bahkan ribuan penyihir menggunakan sihir kombinasi seperti invis + fly. mungkin tidak akan membutuhkan assassin lagi. sihir perpaduan antara invis + fly hanya ryu yang tau mantra nya. tidak mudah membuat sihir baru bahkan untuk ryu. ryu membuat sihir kombo seperti itu membutuhkan waktu 5 bulan bahkan dengan bantuan para high tier penyihir.
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"You're younger than me," Annabeth replies dryly.
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"Trancy."

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