The Primordial Memory

very interesting plotline. a must read for me

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You know it's good when it's made by Perverted Fella..................................................................................

I will start of by saying, you're doing great writing a story and it's not an easy job. You have succeeded in doing it. Congratulations !!The quality of wiritng is good and had good scope to become an even better writer in the future.The story development in each chapter is slow but very informative and very needed to get the insight of the story, hence I loved it !! Causing impatience means readers are eager to know more about this story.The character designing is coming up well, interestingly and sort of makes a reader keep reading further to know more, but getting to the point was a bit dragged that in between some paragraphs I found myself skimming through to know what it is. But worth it, the mysterious feeling which makes me wanna know more unable to stop, it already a success .Updating I have to say a but slow since it's only updated twice in a week, I wonder if people would see the novel and reme to read it if it lies unnoticed. Maybe that could be improved.The world background. Am applauding.  It's perfect and simply marvellous. You have a wonderful insight about things you are wiritng and it gets to the reader well. With the descriptions I could see everything in my head as i read. Congratulations, you're a writer with a future. Keep going and try updating regularly.  Fighting !

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So far, I really like it. It have human experimentation ,reincarnation, superhuman mc, and a mc who wants to live simply. it's   that I am not really into dark webnovels but this webnovel got me hooked. For some reason I kinda feel like something is missing? I don't know what but can the author try just once to find it.