Midnight Cinderella - Reviews

a real different story

I read until chapter 220 and that was all I could stand. The translation quality and grammar is fine, but there is no plot, no world building, no character development, nothing. Everything that happens in the story is completely convenient to the plot. Like for example, he needs some super rare thing to evolve his talent, and somehow he enters a random cave and finds that exact thing. This happens over and over again. Also, the author makes ZERO effort to develop any of the characters. Its almost as if all the characters are just there to create conflict; even the love interests. The worst part to me is that every plot point is dragged on and on and is so repetitive and boring. I don’t mind the same powerscaling bs and faceslapping, but this is just the same plot but repeated five times and that happens for every conflict in the story. Would not recommend.

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I didn't see harem tag. It needs harem tag.The writing is lacking in depth, all of it feeling rather shallow.It's okay for casual reading.I personally only read this when it's my 24 hour free read.

Its good in the earlier chap. After the court master in around 70ish chap. I then realise that its a constant repeat.  The pov is not even with the mc anymore. And the romance is kept hanging. Author hust introduce a potential wife, then have her as a background character. Its boring and a repeat. Meet someone(a), then that someone(a) being another someone(b), then (b) also told another someone(c) and bring them to mc and repeat. No difference. Even the status are the same. The someone would be an important figure then will end up do anything to lick mc’s a**.

Due to me reading scoring ancient body from the get-go I can see a lot of similarities but it doesn't affect me reading the actual story that much. Grammar could be improved since there are some obvious grammatical errors but hopefully, this will improve over time. But there are plenty of good things for example straying away from the cliche of being able to kill without batting an eye also him having a big background rather than being wastewood. the battles are amazing as you can see the development. Can't really comment on romance since I haven't really seen it from what I have read so far. But overall good novel just try and stray away from the same setting as SABFGG and improve grammar and this book will jump in quality.

I like this book, although the release is somewhat slow, I always expect more chapters, thanks for bringing us this work... the plot is interesting!

Truly engaging with new sub-plot lines for every dungeon the MC encounters. The MC is quite the capable person and makes the best of every opputunity that may or may not come his way by diligent assessment of his surroundings; and the use of cunning and pure willpower to live on to deal with dangerous moments. The supporting player characters are individually intriguing in their own right. (Lawless is a particularly humorous side character pair with our MC-the straight man in this comedy duo) The natives to the various dungeons the MC enters are all spectacularly realistic during their interactions, leaving the reader terribly saddened by their short and limited show time. In conclusion, this is quite a thriller action-packed story with alevel-headed MC worth investing in.

I like the stpry but there are two mood points. One is the wordpadding, the story gets streched till its breaking point. At some points of time I skipped multiple pages, because the author just kept repeating himself.The other mood point is the regressing translation quality. After chapter 60-80 the quality takes a noticable dive. Translations for specific things get changed multiple times per chapter, words that don't seem to belong into sentenced and many more. It feels like the typical MTL errors that were forgotten to correct. A shame because at least 80 percent of those errors could have been corrected by simply reading through chapter once more before releasing.

The plot is not bad but the Mc is a bit stupid. Let's leave out the saving the mother and daughter figure, I can understand that since there was a sort of back story to why he saved them. But saving that random vampire chick in the forest made no sense. Your being hunted by other vampires and your in enemy territory, the saving a damsel in distress excuse is bullsh#t and overused. An mc can have morals but it has to make sense. I decided to stop reading when he did that.??

First time read Novel Video games and it's soooo good, all are added well, even the character design and the story development. Ganbatte author!!!

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