Midnight Cinderella

a real different story

I read until chapter 220 and that was all I could stand. The translation quality and grammar is fine, but there is no plot, no world building, no character development, nothing. Everything that happens in the story is completely convenient to the plot. Like for example, he needs some super rare thing to evolve his talent, and somehow he enters a random cave and finds that exact thing. This happens over and over again. Also, the author makes ZERO effort to develop any of the characters. Its almost as if all the characters are just there to create conflict; even the love interests. The worst part to me is that every plot point is dragged on and on and is so repetitive and boring. I don’t mind the same powerscaling bs and faceslapping, but this is just the same plot but repeated five times and that happens for every conflict in the story. Would not recommend.

The novel translation is back! what a good news! I hope this well stay until the chapter end! Please help support this novel so that it well stay being translated.

I didn't see harem tag. It needs harem tag.The writing is lacking in depth, all of it feeling rather shallow.It's okay for casual reading.I personally only read this when it's my 24 hour free read.

Its good in the earlier chap. After the court master in around 70ish chap. I then realise that its a constant repeat.  The pov is not even with the mc anymore. And the romance is kept hanging. Author hust introduce a potential wife, then have her as a background character. Its boring and a repeat. Meet someone(a), then that someone(a) being another someone(b), then (b) also told another someone(c) and bring them to mc and repeat. No difference. Even the status are the same. The someone would be an important figure then will end up do anything to lick mc’s a**.

Due to me reading scoring ancient body from the get-go I can see a lot of similarities but it doesn't affect me reading the actual story that much. Grammar could be improved since there are some obvious grammatical errors but hopefully, this will improve over time. But there are plenty of good things for example straying away from the cliche of being able to kill without batting an eye also him having a big background rather than being wastewood. the battles are amazing as you can see the development. Can't really comment on romance since I haven't really seen it from what I have read so far. But overall good novel just try and stray away from the same setting as SABFGG and improve grammar and this book will jump in quality.