"Nice" Byron was relieved that he didn't have to wait till he had a million system points to even see the strong items in the system, and decided to use the three tickets that he received.
"Great. I will come to your place three days later if you ready to open your business. I come with A Yun while bringing vegetables too, and will stay in your place. You have room for us right?"
He could feel the drain on his Chakra increase. Since he had spent so much time with his eye uncovered, he was going to need some bedrest when this mission was done, best case. Worst case, he would be completely bedridden, if they completed the mission.
Writing a review for the fp, seems interesting from the synopsis though, I'll probably give it a shot
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This is one of my favorite type of book to read. So far it’s good. Keep up the good work.?
"I'm not sure what to say about this story yet, but I wanted to leave a review to show my support. The comment section seemed a bit lonely, and I didn't want the author to feel discouraged. From what I've read so far (only the first chapter ?), the story isn't bad, but it's not entirely captivating either. The writing style is decent, but it lacks a certain spark or wow factor that would make it truly engaging. Despite this, I can tell the author is putting in effort, and that's something to be appreciated ?. Let's keep supporting them in their writing journey! (Sorry for the lengthy review! ?)"
this is genuinely one of the best books i’ve read and i swear if it wasn’t so good i would’ve dropped it for the inconsistency but i literally can’t i’m hooked it has great world building and details and the characters are amazing but the inconsistency on uploads make it’s hard but it’s well worth it
The story is good and the character development is passable, the world background is acceptable. The only glaring thing I can say that annoys me are the UNFORGIVABLE GRAMMAR MISTAKES that are too numerous to ignore and enjoy the story!I'm sorry I tried to push on with his novel but I can't simply ignore bad grammar! And it doesn't seem to be getting better with newer chapters!
I'm awaiting to see how this story will develop. The story is only just beginning, it is still in its earlier stages, can't tell how it will deviate from the original storyline plot, but stI'll kept true to the Douluo Dalu universe.
Muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito obrigado por esse ótimo novel
Hard to follow, constantly changing the talking styles and adding emojis. If you can stomach that plus broken / hard to read English give it a try. Failed reading it twice