First i have to say good job to the author, i only read a few chapters and i'm already hooked, this book would become a masterpiece in no time. I'll implore y'all to check it out and give it a try?
Hello everyone, Author here. This would be my first time to actually write a something so I want to thank those who wanted to read and those who had already gone through the current chapters. I'm not shameless enough to give my own writing a 5 star rating but I of course it still being a bit shameless giving this rating. Well, it's my own written story after all.As a newbie author I know that there is a lot that I needed to improve at but I guarantee that my concept in creating the whole background of the story to be quite interesting. Anyways, I would appreciate if you guys leave reviews or even criticize me for errors on my writing and things I needed to improve on.Again, thank you and have a nice read.
"Tianlong, how come you're..."
To be continued,
We straggled down quickly through the rain to the cars. Owl-Eyes spoke to me by the gate.
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
I need to get myself away from this place
Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
I could use a little fuel myself
Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming
You'll never shine if you don't glow