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I captivating storyline. couldn't stop myself from reading more and more chapter go for it
Sigh. At least fix the synopsis. Read all available chapters, it might be too early to judge but from what I've read this novel ain't for me.
So far it's a good story. i really like the pacing. looking forward to more chapters ?
Hi, everyone! This is your author. I'm sorry for reviewing this haha! But I just want to tell everyone that please! Don't open the premium chapters, chapters 22 to 24. The chapters next to Chapter 6. I made a mistake. Hopefully, my editor will help me. That's all. If you see that the said chapters were already deleted, just disregard this review. Haha! Anyway, I hope you enjoy this. Your thoughts are welcome!
Your world-building is rich and detailed, I feel like I'm right there with the characters.
This is my first time reading such an interesting werewolf book. Well done, author.
I am already excited to read this book. I can't wait
Honestly speaking, it's an amazing novel. please read it. it's uniquely catered for everyone to enjoy.❤️
awesome ? its agood beginning i wish you could continue this way of mc building and world building and what i really loved about the book that is no harem no female leadno romance (i hate it caze how a villain can love he is a villain, "no emotions, no feeling , cold heart") and i asored MC's selfishnessgo ahead ??your book will be great ??
The story started good, it had a nice concept, a good system to keep balance and good plot twists, but the whole Jenny saga that has been going for so long has ruined everything. The focus has shifted from MC to Jenny for so long, and has destroyed the character development for the MC.The author made Jenny so close to the MC out of nowhere, when she should have been a target for revenge, without even an apology (I would've liked to see her get destroyed to be honest), and MC does everything to help her get Apex under the ridiculus excuse of removing her as a competitior,. On top of that the MC has to listen to the whims of Clarisse because she threatens him with removing Jenny from Apex succession? Why is this a threat for MC? The MC left New York with just one word from Clarisse. This is just bad and makes the MC look like a desperate pushover. Even when Jasmine sabotaged Wireframe and Clarisse did nothing to stop her, the MC didn't retaliate, just for the sake of fucking Jenny. Why is she so important? The MC should have destroyed Jasmine and Clarisse and took over Apex for himself as revenge with the help of the system. That would've been satifying, but no, Jasmine got away with a slap on a wrist.Ah, everything is just frustrating.
wow fantastic great story, wonderful. keep it up
I like this a lot. Though there is stuff in it that annoys me like his goal to get back to this one chick or some of the grammatic, this is still easily one of the better novels in this whole genre.
