love it. Good job author. book is soo interesting. I rarely go beyond a few chapters with most novels but this one I can't wait for chapter releases.
The story is good, the plot is good, the world development is also good...... but may I know who the actual mc is?It feels like the novel's own mc is shadowed by the side characters, to the point it frustrates me.I totally liked the story but because of this single thing, this novel ain't cup of my tea...
First off Super amazing plot with tons of potential. But when it come to the MC I often wonder if he has a brain in that head of his. He doesn’t try to make full use of his future knowledge especially when it’s most needed in the beginning. He has to come up with a new invention that even the future doesn’t have in order to make money, (BTW it’s an invention that is way overpriced) instead of using one of the thousands of invention that were made in the next 1500 years. Overall I hope you can give the MC a big IQ boost and let him take advantage of his future knowledge a lot more. Also you should check out the book “END OF THE MAGIC ERA” for inspiration and examples of a smart mc, cuz it has the same plot as this novel.
good story want to read more but who is MC Kathleen or someone else i am confused. 3rd chapter was good i think this one is going to be a good read if the author stick around .
This book is really nice and the characters are well developed. I love it, I can’t wait to continue reading it. Luara is really strong, but who could be behind all these?Her husband looks innocent but how do we know for sure???????
All in all very good. Doesn’t entirely focus on *** and even includes the POVs of some other characters besides the MC. Can’t wait for more.
I love this book, I’ve been reading on Wattpad but thought I’d support the book here.
Kenji and I activate our Magic Eye and soon after, we can see and hear humans around the place.
He and his mighty power, split the world into two parts.
Here i'm sat in the chair, being forced to wear the clothes that bound our freedom. In this quiet room I just stared at the monitoring glass front of me.
"Come, lets have some drink for all time's sake. " JN
"Dear God" I muttered to myself