This is my honest thoughts, I think your writing is superb but it needs to be proofread for grammar mistakes. Your storyline is engaging and full of action which keeps the reader glued to their seat. The descriptions are amazing!
The translation is awful ,this tranlator has ruined alot of novels with poor tranlation that you can get with a simple google translate. Translator 549690339. is doing this so when good translations come out they cant really compete with this fast cookie paced poor translation
Copy & Paste storyThere is another story with similar plot."guy gets system, gives letter, ends up at his master's place, tested, thrown off the cliff, love not allowed, asking others about what to do when in love etc..."
I kinda enyojed the story. Its true that it was a bit too slow paced but still i endure it and read till chap 365 but i couldnt continue. MC personality is something i dont dislike except of him being to discrete for too long but his simp side is something i could not accept anymore. At first it was ok but as chaps went by its increased more and more to the point chap 365 was my limit before puking so i had to stop. Still if you are okey with this 2 points, the story is enjoyable over all
From the word 'Go!' this story hits. FL's trauma is vividly portrayed and her pain is relative. I don't have much chapters to go by, but it looks like a promising book .author should hurry up and give more updates.
