I’m on chapter 52 and I’ll tell you author; I love your novel so far, everything is so smooth, and the way the MC and FL carry themselves is just perfect. I just hope that there is not much time separation between them where one leaves and comes back like 100 years later. Overall, I love it.
it has great potential but there are some things that are just stupid why this novel is bad 1 abilities are op when they are just common example: an archer goblin has a skill that makes you invisible If you are still and not breathing I said why it is op in a paragraph comment when it got introduced(it basically is perfect for ambush hiding and confusing your enemy) archer goblins have a skill called archers reinforcement or something it gives an enchantment to ALL weapons not only bows all weapons a sage has a skill that shows every living being in 100 meters ( it hard counters assassin's with stealth making them useless and remember this is a common skill and there are like 5 more ranks) 2 the mc can hit small targets from a distance with a bow without missing when it's the first time that he uses one ( he doesn't have any skills that help with aiming or stats that help yet) the same with a sword he became an expert with 1 hour of experience3 I found an exploit ? when he enslaves a monster ( with a skill) he can give it a name when it gets a name it evolves meaning it gives more xp when killed and also gets an additional skill which he can devour ? my opinion of the novel: if you don't care if the system or character makes sense read it if you don't like bad quality go as far away from this piece of art :)
Well I have to say the story development if fine, if not good, but your lacking in some parts (mostly grammar). Some of things you need to fix is grammar, world building, and character design in that order. I like the goblin stuff, but I’ve read stories like it (re:monster). The best part about this novel is the stability of updates, but after you finish the story that wouldn’t matter anymore, so I would have to rate it lower. But, overall it’s an alright read not bad but not good either just in between.P.S: Author if you are reading this please find an editor or a fan willing to correct the mistakes in the story
All I could say from this story is 'amazing'. Just from the word itself left a big impact on how the author narrated it clearly. It is beyond perfection. I tell you, readers.From the initial chapters, it's already goddamn intriguing... and I could tell that they're more challenges that will unfold as the story goes on. Reccomend it for all. An amazing read, really.
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