Quite an interesting story to read , need more updates ☺️
Such an interesting story with lot of secrets something quite different and interesting just waiting for the new plot bts to find about the girl and if she already had a boyfriend then how and with whom she will fall in love love this one
No harem let's gooo..... ?Love novels with actual plot that are not just carried by harem and other fan service.
I just love reading this novel, the chatracters are so fun, interesting and amusing to see, the plot is also a new and interesting. Although your writing need a bit of work but overall it such a nice read. So continue writing more fun chapters Author, and could you please update them faster ????I really want to read more of Bryson adventures and see how far this story will go
Author here. There are areas that could use refinement, particularly in pacing. I welcome any questions you have about the story and i hope you enjoy the read!
Will you add more characters later on? I am having problem to remember everyone now.His best friend, his family, his staff, the iron guards then this antagonist's dogs some more.I am okay with it. Maybe you can add the aux chapter about the characters too to make it easier for people to follow. Other than that, I love how you build the story around Novan City only for now. I love how his best friend was brought to be part of the football (soccer) team now. Was wondering about him for a while too.
Hmm.. about character named joan, she shouldnt have dated him at all.. just friends with hidden feelings might have been enough in my opinion, she is really an idiot, if she knew that she and the mc are from diffrent backgrounds from the start then she still started liking him nonetheless which is really stupid if you think, and okay.. one can argue that one cant control ones feelings then be that it may she could have just kept the feelings hidden if she couldnt go through with till the end right.. what frustrating is that mc likes her even after seeing her kiss someone even if there is a big reason behind it. In my opinion even if there is a need for a kiss for the story to pogress as it is , i think a peck on the cheek could have been better... than a kiss on the lips right? actually considering her extreme feelings of love that was displayed there shouldnt be a kissing in the first place.. right author?( And if you are going to tell me that she only realised her extreme feelings when he died after one tear of being together i wint believe it..)
I'm obsessed with iti really love the book so much.
I think it’s a great book that need little to no major corrections but maybe introducing a new side-character that has some unique connection to Master Magi. One minor thing that I think you could add is his Dragon Horned Rhino evolves into a ‘purer’ form of a dragon and gains some special ability only for earth dragons. The last thing you should keep doing is adding the snotty rich kid type that get always seems to get whooped in the end. Its been great reading this book and I hope you add a second part.
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"You are so not the boss of me." Kid calls after her, annoyed and purposefully dragging out the so.
The next day Adrian accompanied me to office. We walked hand in hand. After I settled in he went to speak with Eric. I was working by telling myself not to get distracted with the events of last night when Adrian came back. He was about to tell something when Ronan walked in talking with a file in his hand. He didn't see Adrian immediately.