I enjoyed reading this. The dual system is a nice twist from conventional novels! Imo the pacing was good, it didn't feel overly detailed and boring, nor did it feel too rushed. I like that they have to slowly develop their emotions overtime rather than quickly gaining an op system right away. Currently the characters and their personalities are clear with little or no confusion, so that's good! I really enjoyed reading this and hope to see more of it in the future
Is there romance in this novel? please no it holds back the MC
the early chapters got so much description and adjective And you're repeating sentences and thoughts, though I'm intrigue from the story you're making, keep up the good work
A Very Nice Story with Strong Starting and PlotAnd The Word structure is Litnice Jobthe first Chapter Got Me Hooked
This story is such a rare find! The dynamic between the FL and ML is so balanced, and they both have such strong, compelling personalities. It’s refreshing to see characters like these. I can’t wait to see how the hidden mission shakes things up—it feels like the tension is about to skyrocket.
At chapter 24 right now, and so far, so good. As someone who read your first book, you've definitely improved by a LOT! I love the relationship between Adeline and Enzo and how he's always getting on her nerves one way or the other, but in a cute way? I totally recommend you all give this book a try✨️
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I read up to to chapter 10 and I am looking for more. This is quite a good novel, and I am starting to like fantasy stories. I love Aiden and looking forward to read more about him.
Wow! This book is a promising one. I love the characters development and designs.
l have only read the first chapter but it's promising
I love fantasy books like this, it keeps me glue to my screen. ?
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