Nice plot. however, there seems to be no character development. I already read 800+ chaps but there is barely progression in the story. author, I appreciate your hard work in writing but please don't repeat the parts of the story, usually their thoughts by rewording it. it's getting quite boring.
A kingdom building novel that written purely on author's imagination with little or no researching and logical thinking.MC'S 260 IQ gives me some thought that I might have over 9000 IQ myself. He knows nothing. He did loads of stupid, naive and illogical thing without consequences followed. Other characters are bad too, no dimension at all.The technologies are meh and mess up. The technologies development in another world can be different, and the differences must have logical reason to them. The land without a known natural resources is one of the biggest city in a kingdom. That city is old enough for farmers to plant crops until the soil is not fertile anymore, but secret mines are never run out. They feed millions of their citizen by growing crop without using any farming tool or fertilizer at all, how?
great novel till now , will be watching it closely .
"Oh, Doc."
The door opened.
At first, I could not see anything; It took some minutes for my eye to adjust.
"But I was almost there, so close… just… a little more and I would have known…" she spoke softer and softer with each words until they became nothing but a whisper. She pushed her head further back almost unconsciously and her jaw jutted up, exposing more and more of her neck beneath her scarf. The scarf shifted and something white was shown under, a scar-
The room was silent for several seconds, followed by a muttered, "Cool," from Cooper.
He fumbled at the embroidered coverlet, trying to take it from the bed, and lay down stiffly--was instantly asleep.
Didn't make sense not to live for fun
He jumps back, holding his chest as it feels his lung was on fire, his muscles were screaming and realized he never get proper rest after all this fighting and they start losing their ambush advantage. Beatrice had dispatch many of them, gone her day building a web and waiting for a fly to fall in, she had grown to be a ground hunter, using her speed, silk, and leg. She became an unrivaled assassin, binding, tripping and disabled her enemy while her leg would dodge and stab at their soft spot with her sharp leg.
"masuk"Rias berkata