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It's an intriguing story with well writtencharacters. I highly recommend it.
Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?
I can't say how much I love this book.OMG I just said it?
This is my first review, so this honestly weighs heavily for me.I wouldn't have written a review for any novels on here, but I had to say something about this novel.First and foremost, only three novels on this app have ever resonated with me with me wanting more, this being one out of the three, I may not have much reading time on this app but I have read enough hours cumulative throughout my life regarding novels, LNs, WNs, Wuxias, Xuanhuans, Eronovels, you name it, so I have quite the bit of experience differentiating low quality time wasters to well thought out novels such as this one.The writing quality of this novel is exceptional, leagues above the authors' other works, with sentencing and phrase selection that doesn't bore you out, with the stream element comments very much hooking you in, the stream comments gave me quite a bit of a chuckle and largely entertained me, Story development is predictable yet somehow not simplistic in terms of plot.Stream and system component very well done, making use of cliche novel genres and making something though not exactly original, is definitely very enjoyable and unique in its own sense.Character design is also well done, though not perfect, it is definitely good enough to invoke some feelings out of you, especially in the early chapters. World background is also meticulously done same with that of the other elements and you can easily tell that the author takes the time to incorporate the plot seamlessly into the next arc. This is a very well done novel that deserves my first review ever, and a round of applause from me, if I had to rank this novel it would definitely be in my upper top 10.Updates are relatively decent, Novel is enjoyable enough to not nitpick, and lastly I hope the chapter quality continues to be kept at the same level as of writing this review, it would be a shame if the novel degrades in quality.Thank you Sleazy for this wonderful novel. Looking forward to more chapters and the completion of this novel and to your next.
It's actually decent, I swear. I put a lot of time, effort and research into this, and would appreciate it if it's received better than my last novel.
It was a great read!;Even though still confused by some stuff. I can see the effort put in by the authorGreat work, author
Arigato Author san for continuation of this book!Waiting for more updates in future!
Epic Novel author please continue writing,,, you're amazing and thanks for the chapters I appreciate your story so much,,,keep up the good work
Hey, Author here. I'll be bias and give my book five star. Though I know it worth it. Let dive straight to what to expect from this book. A wise and overpower Mc that will not think with his little brother. Harem. Yes. System. Yes. Mystery. Yes. Revenge. Yes.Worldbuilding with modern invention introduce by the Mc. This is a story where the MC is not going to level up alone, but the whole world will grow stronger with him. A fight not only against the Mc, but the world itself. A story where a mortal planet ascend to the upper realm and dominate other realms with the Mc. With Modern invention and Ancient Techniques; the Mc and the Lotus World dominate the multi universe. Guess, this is all I can say. If you want to find out how everything unravel. Read to find out. Cheers.
tbh its weird, it's like being written to be purposely bland. its 50/50 mid ig
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