"Can I name you the system Darren said.
mianwhile Ryuu continue kissing Alfred after he was satisfied he Carry him bride style to the bed and throw him roughly on the bed and get on top.
"Sir, put me on one floor, please?
where there are butterflies in the chest.
Ignoring the glare coming from the two, Ryuji smiled and said, "I think we should go back to the castle."
*Slice*
Hmm, the novel isn't bad, exactly. It just feels like the author didn't really know which perspective to write from. I read the first 10 chapters and at least four of them were dedicated to one person's POV (point of view), even though that person wasn't the MC. Another thing is that the author makes the MC extremely unrealistic. Lots of MCs are unrealistically powerful, but I think most of them went through a grueling process before getting so OP; like in "Genius Doctor Black Belly Miss," the FL went through a lot before she could get her title as a genius doctor. The MC here just reads a couple of old books and is suddenly able to concoct amazing potions. It isn't a terrible idea, but it definitely isn't great, either, and it certainly doesn't make the novel more interesting. It would have been more interesting if the novel started with the process or something.
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traduction en français s'il vous plaît pour moi
The storyline seemed promising at first glance, but it quickly devolved into a convoluted mess of clichés and predictable plot twists. The characters lacked depth and development, making it impossible
Thought that it’s a really good book so far
I have found that I care a lot about the characters and their eventual ends in this story, which is good. There has been a ton of character development and unique characters so I actually know who someone is when I read their name instead of skipping past their name because they're unimportant and bland. The side characters have major roles and they affect the plot in a big way.