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5 star coz it's been a while since i saw a novel with no lock chapters.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I personally like monster evolution stories and this looks like a book people who read fantasy will enjoy. Overall a good book with average writing quality, consistent updates and an mc who has an actual personality and does not just go around mindlessly becoming stronger.
Frankly, it's hard to say ntr, but there's definitely cheating. Ntr usually has sexual intercourse and stealing. Here, Kyle and Helia have been in a relationship for a while. There was no sexual intercourse between them. But there was flirting, kissing and hugging. This is cheating no matter which country's culture and law you look at. The author wrote it well, not as disturbing as ntr novels but still not for me. Cheating is one of my most hated mistakes. In cheating, reasons are just excuses. She was alone, weak, in a difficult situation. These are just excuses to console yourself. Helia admits that she loved Kyle too, when she was about to die. Of course, we can have feelings for more than one person in life. However, this is not an excuse to cheat. If there was a reverse harem or open relationship, it would be more acceptable to me. But cheating is taboo for me. Of course, we should not blame only Helia. Arial himself cheated on Helia. That's why this relationship felt so weak. I don't like drama too much. The novel itself is good. The writing style of the author is very good. However, this novel is not for me. For me, the most important elements in the novel are; plots and relationships. That's why I wasn't too attached to this novel. However, the author did a good job. I would recommend reading it to anyone who is not bothered by it.
It is currently the tenth chapter. The story has been good so far, but the start was a little confusing, atleast for me. I think that this will turn out to be a good novel in this genre. The fact that this is in my opinion a promising novel is simply because of the family dynamic, most novels don't have this kind of family thing going on for them, at most the mc will be dating someone and that is in my opinion really boring.in short: A really promising novel, that has a great family dynamic.And author pls update the novel!!!!!
An excellent story, though some grammatical error here and there, I believe the author is improving.
it's amazing...you won't even realised which chapter you are reading coz u I'll be so absorbed in the novel....I have only one issue, PLEASE DON'T MAKE IT INTO HAREM. Love should be Monogamous
I'm loving this story at the moment the world is great and sucks you in story development is good quality is up there for WN all around i think this is a 4/5.
This is the “Transmigrated to become NPC sand take advantage of players genre”For similar works-The Legendary Mechanic (Sci-fi World)I am a Legendary Boss (Western Fantasy World)And lastly this novel (Xianxia World)Yay. I feel like this genre gets views off of how so many people can relate to being a gamer and getting scammed (or at least it feels like) by NPCs. There’s a similar genre for getting scammed by game creator.
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come on this is a good book, for me it's way better than "Pocket Hunting Dimension
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