I would say that is a very new genre.... you know mc reincarnating as a hero where villian is main protagonistTill now , this novel is pretty nice and updating stability is also very good and especially I like how mc doesn't want to be associated with any of heroines ( in a romantic way ) . I really really hope that author won't add harem or any romance here as you know how much difficult it is to find a novel without any romance or harem nowadays .. .. I also like Xin's interaction with system. Nice novel .... keep it up author !!!! Well, I have a question .. author , is English your second language ??
This book is quite nice, as the mc is not too overpowered. There are some minor grammar issues, and the whole storyline feels kinda wacky. For example, the early chapters are about his family and then whoooosh and he just leaves them
hello author ? when you said after chapter 20 he will be evil and it was true and it is so cool and I love it and also please make more because I really love it and some of us loved it too so please make more and don't over work your self and thank you
I think the story is cool and the development is cool, I hope the author keeps updating.......................................................
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very interesting novel, kind weird to say the truth i don't read too much yet but the MC is interesting really want to see what he gonna do in the future
I obviously haven't read all 60 chapters yet. However, from what I've read so far the novel is extremely interesting. It has a good setting with no crazy nationalism/racism (the MC acknowledges the customs of Japan and does not disrespect them). He is also very cool-headed, this however does make the MC seem somewhat robotic at first, but it gets better in a few chapters. Overall none of the characters (imo) are that annoying and seem to serve a purpose (for at least the short term).All in all the best part about this novel is the fact that it isn't a trash generic cultivation/videogame novel with no originality. While the topic has been done before (Sword Deity in Tokyo) this novel seems to have a better execution and a better progression system that seems like it will actually progress at a decent pace instead of stagnating.I personally like this novel so far and really hope that it will be picked instead of the countless generic novels in the trial read.
Wow, this is a nice action story with good pace. The action scenes in the first chapter is nicely written, author kudos for that. And Logan, his character set up has left me completely in love with him. I badly want to know more about him, him fighting with cards just makes it more cool. And the fl is nice also, Nice story.
I've read up to around chap 600 and I definitetly will continue waiting for the updates. I really like this novel, and I praises say it all. However, I wanna leave something that may be of help for the author, and here are a few recommendations:1. The writing could really make use of some editing, such as on some of the common word spellings i.e. "could" instead of "cloud." Also, some words were misplaced i.e. "like sword" instead of "sword like." Another thing would be the lack of "a" and "the" such as in "I am father" instead of "I am a father."2. Pseudo names and/or monikers need mitigation. I feel like frequently using "Young one" or "Snow Beauty" always makes the reader think "Who was that again?" Feel free to use pronouns for I think it will greatly improve the writing quality (and also reduce the time needed to type haha.) If author-san still wants to use the aliases, I would prefer them being used as frequently as the real names in the narration, as that will give us time to imprint the name on our heads.3. Being direct in writing flares up our imaginations more than just leaving it for us to imagine (quite ironic no?) There are times when author-san used "Obviously you know the reason why!" and I felt nice when I really knew it, but felt frustrated when I didn 't know resulting to me not grasping the events. It may be spoonfeeding, but I think being repetitive sometimes would be a great help.4. In line with #3, the descriptions could really use more specific-ness (And I really like that author-san got better in describing characters in the latest chapters.) The places where the scene happens need a bit more detail such as the color of the room, the placement of the furnitures/obstacles, the POV location, the sights as the eyes extend toward either left or right, etc. You can also utilize mentioning widths and lengths (numbers don't hurt; more so in moderation.) Also you can elaborate on the number of enemies too, and the exact number that died/are left. In terms of describing powers, it can also be a bit useful to use "the shockwave reached 3 kilometers" and the world sizes may also utilize this by comparing to the size of the Earth.5. The world building is a bit confusing for me. It might help by releasing a helpful chapter for the essential information. I still don't understand a few of the power aquisition and improvements up till now (maybe my comprehension is bad too I guess hehe)6. There are a few plotholes, but all stories have them right? Just don't forget what happens to the people/buildings/world around the event portrayed. Don't hesitate to mention how the roof collapsed, how buildings in a 100 km radius got blown, how a lot of people ran when this guy appears etc etc. They really get us to feel the events.7. In line with #6, the R-18 scenes are a little inconsiderate HAHA. There are just times when the MC is walking here then boom the R-18 scenes come and I don't know how the hell they came from the shop to the dark alley.In summary: Don't hide anything from us author-san. Pour everything you imagine into writing. We want to see what you see. We want to know what you know. I f*cking love this novel and I will don anything to help it get even more f*cking good. Love from a loyal reader of yours~P.s. If I have more suggestions, I will reply them here as well :D Keep writing!
VERY emotional, VERY confrontational, VERY insecure author who will repeatedly tell you to go read something else whenever you point out something you don't like in the comments.Very well then, i will go read other, better stories with more stable authors.At the very least i will not review bomb this story, as there were moments i genuinely enjoyed (such as the first time phoenix was summoned) but i came to dislike the flow of events. Truthfully my interactions with the author were just icing on the cake.
I love this story and I can't wait for more, I need to know what happens next, please update please!I love how they use Harrison's name if he's doing something but when the others talk to him they use his new name Hadrian, it's like they are trying to sperate them but at the same time bring them together, two half's of the same whole.Otiz seems to be cute I wonder what he looks like
This is amazing! No seriously. I love reincarnation books, and this one is already a potential favorite for me. If you are like me and are looking for something a bit different from the typical harem reincarnation books, then this one come heavily recommended from me. The characters are are well fleshed out. The author sets a good pace for the story. The fight scenes and characters' thoughts are well detailed. The world building is pretty good as well. Fair warning, this is a fairly new book, so be prepared to wait a while for the chapters to be released. Other than that thank you very much Author for the amazing book so far. I'm really looking forward to the future of this book.