I'm really enjoying this story morning it does have adult content but it doesn't Focus only on that there is a story behind it and there are other things going on author jumped through time a little bit at one point and it made it a bit hard to follow but since then it's been in chronological order which might just be a personal issue I have trouble following ones that jump around a lot so maybe that's my issue more than anyone else I think his character design is good but I think it could be better it needs to be fleshed out a little bit more in some places main character seems to be okay for the most part and some of the other characters he didn't spend enough time with so maybe that's part of the issue as well I think he'll be going back to them eventually the main character will see them again and maybe we'll get more information then but there's a lot of questions left which isn't a bad thing if you're trying to make things a mystery but it's something that frustrates me that's all the world seems interesting I'm hoping he's going to start learning more about the world cuz it seems like there's levels to the world and he's been put into a lower one now but I'm not sure on how that works yet hasn't been touched on very much I'm hoping now that he's at the school I know he's a Slave but I'm hoping he will learn more now that he has access to the library and so on I'm looking forward to the story continuing and while I wish it updated more it is very stable like it's pretty consistent with how much it updates so it's not a surprise when something comes out it's just it's a good story so I kind of wish more would come out sooner but I feel that way about pretty much every story I like so
I know it’s too early for this but I trust this author with her stories, I love the scar you gave me and I know this one will also be good I mean awesome I think I have found a new favorite author on this platform and I want to read more of her stories and I hope she gets the recognition she deserves
Honestly, I am really annoyed. A really good idea with lots of potential wasted by braindead author and by extension, braindead mc. Mc truly “loves” his girlfriend, yes he “loves” her so much that he didn’t even bother searching how to cure her with his omniscient system that can he can search anything up with. No, all he thinks about is creating “perfect accidents” so as to get revenge. What a waste of potential.
This is such a great novel. If you like pure evil MCs, this is a great read. The MC is cold, callous, manipulative, and truly knows himself and is true to his desires. The plot is great if you love a bit of gore, killer stuff, and the talk about how fragile people truly are. The plot also has a nice pace, not too fast or slow in my opinion. The world is getting built slowly but it’s going great so far for only 50 chapters. And I can’t say much about the update stability as well but I hope it updates soon with a notice or something soon because this is great. I hope you’re healthy and safe, author!
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writing quality starts off good in the first few chapters then it devolves to monkey trying to figure out how to open a banana to eat it because the editing is nowhere in sight
Another waste of time novel.The more you read the less sense it makes. Don't waste your time on this dumba** novel. There are like 10 novels with the same lame a** copy paste plot,one worse than each other.
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First I'm now impressed with the good English and sentence phrasing of this novel, it's like a poem. Explaining the Romantic relationship between MC and her bae through poetic words is another level. Other than that the world setting is futuristic you can empathise with MC, why he is so much involved with emotions or memories.
author your book is so nice but you need to update more often because you are getting many many more reads you need to update more often because I love you smoke so much and I cannot wait two to three weeks for you to just upload one chapter I have school
Extremely disappointed in what this has turned into. Chapters became very short, in less than 1 minute I read it completely. An entire chapter being cut into four? Really? Is very sad.
Good to read Great story developmentGood writingWaiting for new chapter.............................Release fast please....................