A servant girl hurriedly entered the room and handed over the small and exquisite case in her hands to Li Rou.
Good book. More chapters should be made available.
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I just binged this and I really liked it. Its a very unique story with the protagonist being beat down over and over again with no holds barred, many times to her own fault. The overarching plot is well written with the unravelling of the memory loss and the whole Rakon deal, making her remember experiences while killing off everyone relevant to it. Really sold me on the downward mental spiral. Here are some thoughts:There were two timeskips, both understandable, but quite sudden. I feel like you could've eased out of them with some development. For example, after the first time-skip you could've had a scene giving insight on Lillian's love-hate relationship with Kalika, or after the second time-skip made it so Rhonda was overly affectionate to the point where it was clear she was hiding something. Often times I felt that some scenes were too sudden and after something happens, the impact on Kalika is rushed. e.g. Rakon and her... yeah. She spent like 2 seconds mulling over it and it didn't seem to contribute to her demonization much. Feel like she should be hating Rakon a LOT more than just "I wanna kill all the demons including Rakon
Excellent writing skills including characterization and personality quotients on every person in the story. Very intense paragraphs in several chapters, especially the first and tenth chapters;
i love this book. it is among my favorites which is only counted on one hand.i wish there was a discord i could join
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Beautiful I love how he's it one of types who are super strong due a certain reason, such reservation or some type of syste, and is not afraid to show how strong he is. I LOVE the way that people cultivate using orbs and how the stages make sense and are easy to k is what is better some I'm not confused on everyone strength.
This novel started so well. It was easy and relaxed, then it got scary in chapter 2. I love the chapter when the meteor falls. I feel like I'm in the story. It felt so real. So thumbs for your writing! ?❤️????
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I like where it is going going but I inundated hate ai generated novels it feels weird to read
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