I haven't completed the novel yet, and there's a concern I have. The backstory of the games so far hasn't quite hit the mark for me. Currently, I'm delving into the second installment, hoping that subsequent installments will offer a deeper, more intricate plot.
In contrast, "A Crowd of Evil Spirit Lines Up to Confess to Me" (CESLCM) provides a much richer gaming narrative. Although I won't stop reading, the relatively simple premise might slightly affect my overall impression or rating.
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Okay, so first off, the smut was good. If I were to rate it, I'd give it an 8.5/10 (I just have pretty high standards).
The plot building was great. It's a typical "transmigrated into a game" plot, but it was well-executed.
The characters were okay, but I got a bit bored halfway through. Did Zagan ever tell Luca his real name? I can’t even remember it anymore, lol.
The story is good, and I’ll definitely continue reading it if I ever have the time.
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Outside of Time is good as f*ck
Yandere caught my attention...hmmm...
How close r we to the ending?
The first time they meet is the cutest thing
Shi An's reaction is just adorable
As someone that is not native, a friendly warning : this is not for everyone. Fancy writing, sentences with unusual and/or jumbled syntax... that's quite the heavy read.
But if you can deal with it, you'll learn some vocabulary here and there...
Forgot the the name of fmc but it was a fire sorcerer that died on the original story. She is like 10 years older than mc.
Read Shura's Wrath, I'm sure you'll dislike it :)
Just because you're correct doesn't mean you're right
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This has a lot of tags, wow. I'm almost done reading Ending Maker so looking for another LN of adventure with a romantic couple. Does this have that? Or is it cultivation trash with romance forced at the end?