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the title is misleading since he didn't own the cultivation world but discover it instead but it's still a good read the story pacing is a bit slow but okay to me
Thanks author, very cool. ?Interesting story concept, can't wait to see what happens! I hope you dont this story. I want to at least see tanks run over knights before you give up.Thanks!
The story is fun to read but the title and description is VERY miss leading ... The MC is an Anti Hero not a demon king ... He is basically a Hero who doesn't feel the need to save every cat he sees in a tree.
The story development looks wonderful...I took an overview and it seems nice.... everything seems so clear to understand...names of characters are no difficult to carry-on with....
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I am a little disappointed. Normally this would be quite the good novel, but compared to the others in selection, this one is not as good.The story progress is very slow sometimes and at other times weirdly fast. There is no immersion and you can skip chapters without losing anything.I get that the MC is important, but it does not make sense to insert the MC in power fights where he should not be able to do anything, only for him to get temporary boosts to show of.I felt cheated during the graveyard fight. MC is apparently the only thinking individual, while does much stronger are at best a little retarded, even the MC father.Not a good start for a novel which could have potential.