Shadow29644
(This review is at 785 chapters)So, it's been over 500 chapters since my last review and I couldn't be happier with how this novel is progressing. Every aspect of this novel has gotten better by leaps and bounds compared to my last review (it might still be pinned, not sure). I'll break it down below.Writing Quality - 4.75 Stars: Everything is more fleshed out now. The fights are more intense and detailed, the interactions feel more real, and everything is more descriptive.Update Stability - 4.9: I think the author may miss a day every so often but it's usually on point.Story Development - 4.5: As more details get uncovered and secrets get wrapped up, even deeper mysteries are found and personally, I'm loving the direction it's heading right now.Character Design - 5: This went from one of the lowest rated to the highest. I won't spoil anything but as the story progresses, you are taught that the line between the "heroes" and the "villains" is very thin, almost non existant. Mistakes have consequences and no one is omnipotent. Everyone has a motive that keeps them moving and even the emotions of the regular soliders and citizens get their own time to shine.World Background - 4.5: Again, going from the lowest rated category to something amazing. The surroundings are detailed, the lives of the people in the federation and Abyss get more detail, and more about what lies beyond the current war is getting unveiled as the story progresses.Honestly, all I can say is it's amazing how far this novel has come and I HIGHLY suggest you all give it a read!
Some voice whispering my head. "I will stop it Darek, if u won't be Creazy anymore, i promise, just pretend to be an normal ... person ...."
We see the human sky as our land. Whereas humans see our land
"Hah, I know that, I read in a book, he said, about 40% of human children are toxid children, but since the emergence of TIKTOG organizations, toxid children started to appear everywhere and began to rise istantly to 70%," said Mamat proudly.
Suddenly we heard a hard knock on the door and someone yelled...this time it wasn't the cops.
Rias had knocked the boys out with her frying pan as they were both now seeing little angels, devils and fallen angels round their heads.
In some other realities however, like this one, Gods true self had decided to watch over them directly. That is what these three are feeling. His presence is in every fiber of this reality. The Darkness is, if you want to call it that, the counterforce of God himself. Or like some people see it, his dark side. Like God is the Force of Creation and Life, it is the Force of Destruction. Like him it is omnipresent... in every universe.
As the little prince walks up to his opponent.... or was it a victim? Everyone can feel the lust for blood and satisfaction the prince emanates.
Back on the ground, the Naruto Shadow Clone and Wanda were running through the streets.
Koro seeing this tried to run towards him to finish him off when he saw that the empty humans decided that attacking him was useless so they aimed at something, or better saying someone else, Seryu.
You'll never shine if you don't glow
She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb
