Shadow29644
Decent novel, but it just feels emotionless. Like it's got the op mc, decent use of his cheat, etc, but he's emotionless and his surroundings are emotionless. It just seems like there's no point to him powering up. Dropped on ch86
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What’s better than one OP MC? Two OP MCs!This story is set in a civilised Victorian setting, with established laws and enforcement. So despite the OPness, they will rarely use them in battles. But fret not, there’s one field where they can show their OPness off even without shedding blood or pulverising cities, and that is- unraveling mysteries. With Xavier’s honed intelligence and mastery over all elements, along with Yue Lin’s extraordinary vision that can see what the others cannot, they will solve cases deemed impossible by others. But are they heroes? Yes, to some. Villains? Again- yes, to some. They are Chaotic Neutral Aligned- caring little about the laws. But they will not shirk away from using the laws for their own needs.As for action, they will be scattered throughout the series. Both of the MCs are old and wise enough to not throw themselves at every unnecessary conflict they find. And I won’t throw arrogant young masters against them just for some unnecessary action scenes and face slapping moments. All of the battles in the series will serve a purpose, with every move taking the story forward.H.a.r.e.m? Nope, not in a million years. Romance? Maybe. I will let the characters write themselves. If they can hit it off, they will. Of course, I will give some external push. Note: This is a work of pure fantasy. So turn your brains off and enjoy… Bull! To take the most out of the story, use 100% of your cerebral capacity.Serious Note: The story will become darker as it progresses. Steady your heart and mind.That’s it for this author’s shameless review. Stay tuned! Enjoy!
Nice development and nice story background...Nice main character settings and side characters settings..Nice system settings (even though it look like familer )...
Can people stop puting random reviews. I want actual reviews that help new readers to my novel decide if they want to read. If you havnt read but put a review i will delete. if you put good or random letters i will delete. I want why you like it and what you dislike and where it can be improved.PLEASE KEEP CONSTRUCTIVE
I read many stories but this one is something different and has suspense in every chapter. just update soon I can't control the excitement for next chapter
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Here’s a link to site that has it released ~ 479Site: https://novelupdates.online/ancestor-above/2#chapter-sectionStill thanks “author “ for posting this here, always nice to find new things to read!
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its alright, i guess. i read up to chapter 10 before i stopped. interactions between father and son are very unnatural and feels super robotic, and it feels like the bisexual stuff is done more for the sake of it than for actual character development. MC is inconsistent in some places, acting and behaving out of character for a "lone wolf" type. also, it felt like a poor writing choice to have the very first job be irregular. inconsistencies with registering to become a porter like how the guy who signed him asked for no ID at all. i guess if you want a novel with a gay mc, this is a choice. otherwise? just read SS rank suicide hunter or stay at home dad in another world, both of which fill their niche better than this one thats straddling both.
