another mediocre story with a 5-year-old as the main character. The first few chapters were stale, the humor didn't hit the mark, and the side characters were all one-dimensional.2.4just sad
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Interesting system novel I've never really seen before. Unique concept, great characters (though not really my type of MC lol) and awesome writing quality.Keep it up, author!
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I'm not saying this is similar to Transcending marketing novel but the live stream concept bit similar .... MC grant by a livestream system and he shot the various animals and interesting topics to get stronger. This is bit crazy but story not bad, you should try this story and feel yourself!
i like the story from the beginning because it has a lot of potential to be great. mc is a dumb and a trusting and it is fine for me since other author tend to do it for Character development. It Started go haywire around 30+ Chapter that i was forced to drop it. suddenly killing innocent for no reason getting mad killing them and urging them to suicide. a sudden 180 degree turn around in attitude . i am not hook with the authors explanation since from the beginning he was introduced as a moraly upright person and it will take a lot for him to change like that . it was forced or the author lacked the right way to present to us readers that it does not click to me the right way and it irks me. Well according to his monologue he was told by the draconians that you gain power with contract souls . I cannot remember though it might be i have been skipping the other chapters since i am getting irritated to his stupidity or bored. Still i am putting this to library probably dropping it. reason? I am not quite sure how others see anti hero is but for me anti hero are those who still follow the HERO line but still has like a morality . it is hard to explain and there is a clear line for psychopath, psychotic or cold protagonist which i label them as Evil MC most of the time unless given an outstanding background or story execution.kudos though for very good world development and interesting way explaining the stats. there are other bad things such us being a little dumb, sudden change of mc attitude like being domineering as if he got mental issue. a little bit trusting and making very bad decisions. according to author this will improve and the product will be a cold hearted, vengeful and selfish protagonist . if that is your cup of tea i highly recommend it to you
Haven’t read the story yet just the synopsisBut this genre is overused ok the asteroid making the vr possible is original but the «OMG MY GAME SKILL ARE NOW REAL LIFE SKILL» or «NO WAY THE GAME IS BECOMING REALITY» is like the Chinese arrogant young master in cultivation novel
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Literally this is one If not the worst slave system Novel that I have seen.Read chapter 9 before chapter 1 becouse you will probably drop this so instead of wasting time go start there where you will hight probably drop if you are a slave system hater.I sincerely hope the Author will be.... read my comment in chapter 9 I fear this Review will be deleted if I continue with my sentence
Another am a cultivation bigshot replica. An MC with no literal power but great medical skills he has no idea about and uses rows upon rows of coincidences and the enemy's false assumptions to look OP. Lame. Please let me know if he actually cultivates when you read this book.
I like evething about this Story. I hope the author can ceep the upload stady again, 'couse i literaly crave what happens next. Not a day goes by that I am not thinking how the World around the Protagonist will develop.