The quality of writing although not the best it makes it up with daily updates. The story although not too deep and unique (as of chapter 9) we have a goal and a basic idea of the world [ better than an average webnovel ]. All said and done I’d say it has great potential and is slowly moving towards its peak.
The power system is not bad but it's got worse when it inherited all the stupidity of eastern cultivation novels eg discrimination of the weak yet powerful, stupid elders who picks sides and sect master who's just a face, weak sect deciples with overgrown egos. Stupid brothers the list goes on
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Love this! Easily one of the better novels on here, despite the authors peculiarities (his obsession with one liners after long pauses) they have created a really solid world and nice reading experience. Overall it’s a very fun read and I am expecting it to get even better!Although i do have some complaints but they’re more about my preferences than the authors writing quality. The only technical thing I could say about this is that the author should be careful not to subconsciously or otherwise become consumed by the Chinese fiction way of writing, fellow cultiva- Ahem, anyways, some vibes I got were very manuah-y or whatever you’d call that spice. Its not an entirely technical complaint and also more of my preference but sudden vibe changes do ruin the pace and already built atmosphere of what you’ve got!Also I’d like to see how the waifus progress! Hopefully they do get an important role after their power ups and development. I’ve seen too many stories where the girls around the mc are immortals with one in a million years bodies only for it to become completely pointless and a waste of time because the Mc has become so much more stupidly powerful than them, where their progress might as well not even matter. Although so far you have done really well with them, and because of it i am even more invested in how they’ll become later on! I hope the Mc doesn’t lose the need to depend on their capabilities because so far you’ve done really well with it. I also like you writing more about the emotional and mental aspect of things and their relationships. (But perhaps you can hold back on those paragraphs of whatever the mc tries to do to sound wise and experienced? It’s probably one of the only things I actually found a bit hard to read so far.)Ah, also I gave about three stars because although the story is a good read it has the potential to be even better! Don’t rush and trust the process, it’s usually better that way! So many authors that get told their stories are good end up rushing things to get even more praise or whatever and ruin the good they had! But also don’t waste chapters please! Well, those date chapters were really nice though ??
This is definitely an interesting story to get into. Besides having to wait for the more chapters I throughly enjoy this story. I can’t wait to see how this develops further.
great slice of life type novel it's great the premises is that the master can't level up till he is on the end of his lifespan which makes it intresting as we can see how he lives a life where everyone he knows becomes stronger or dies before him so hope this get picked
the starting is about migration to another body.........but it is well written and the story development is quite good. I suggest you to write a better synopsis or either let it be, its overall good
Bro the moment you put austronesian empire here in chapter 2 I am already hyping to read this.
bro you're a very god writer. and this is one of my fav story (on mt?) hope you'll update soon and your writing skills are also cool?????well best of luck. you have our full support (idol fanclub??)
One of the better wrItten novels on this site. It is exciting and suspenseful with just the right amount of humor. There were quite a lot of chapter comments which tells me there are quite a lot of readers. I would love to see this novel continued. This is the 4th novel that Webnovel suggested that was dropped.
4.5 stars ... really ???Sometimes, when i check and read reviews, i wonder if these people read the same story as i did..If you don't have any other, better, stories to read or you're just too lazy to look for good ones' i guess you could could give this one a go.
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