Author def loves cliffhangers. The novel itself has superb prose and interesting premise. Pace is good as well, but it's not rushed. Changes in POVs are rare on this platform, and it depends on the reader.
There is way too much of the novel spent in virtual reality, wherein to be honest things aren’t as interesting in there as they are in the real world of the novel. It would kind of be like if there was a novel about a farmer, where he’d watch the growth of his corn or how to make more ridges on the cob. Spending so much time in there is such a big disconnect from the rest of the story, especially with the limited amount of real people in/aware of VR.
"Whats potion master?" Jester asked.
"In the present conditions, I have to answer back to you, hi Ifritz. Like that?"
All of class was silenced for a moment.
Never! Never! Never!
Humans can surpass his
Aiden:what is that
The movie was about a space villain, who was sent to a planet to conquer it. However, he ends up becoming a superhero and protecting the planet. Kit came into the room during the movie and once he caught onto the plot, he eyed Harry. Then, he leaped to get next to him by the end of the couch and whispered, "You planning to be a superhero now?" His face went hand and hand with his mocking tone. By the time that movie ended, the pizza arrived. There was Meat Lovers for Harry and Rebecca, Cheese for Sophie, and it turned out Jasper liked pepperoni. After many pizza slices and many movies, things had gotten dull. True, this was three hours later, but they had the intent to keep going until 7:00 o' clock. The entire time, Jasper had been eyeing Harry, and it made him quite... uncomfortable to say the least. True, the kid had never seen anything like Harry, but it felt weird having him seemingly stare.
Great novel! Author-San please continue this work!!
The water's getting warm so you might as well swim
I said yep what a concept