This is alright. The writing quality is better then 90% of most trial reads. This may be a good one but I am kind of bored of cultivation novels. Give it a go if you don't mind the whole cultivation schtick, but I'm done with them.
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Read up to ch 118. Was readable till then but I really couldn’t Anymore. Save yourself some time and skip this. It is so forced and cliche with zero dimensional characters with typical young master types.
Well I didn't find the synopsis quite captivating but the novel was interesting and a wonderful book. I think you must recheck and make some changes in your novel. I noticed some errors but apart from that, it's a great book.
Its a good book if you like changes that are drastic in what would feel like short chapters. Honestly I stopped reading because I took a break and now i cant find on what chapter I am but its honestly a good book. I am a pretty sad that a lot of characters from the early chapters have died though.
Can't believe this was put on break just after the trial read, this is the second novel I've seen this happen to that I've had my eye on, might as well just delete it
What level of plagiarism will we have in this work? I've seen about eight of the same works so I'm betting on the sixth level. The original work has already disappeared, swallowed by abbreviations, name changes and increasingly stupid villains. How many chapters until the villains are so irrelevant they don't even have a name?
I liked the rhythm of experiencing, everything in writing.The reader revives in his own imagination and idealizes having that adventure. And do that role play, between intrigue, romance and virtual conquest with a pass to face-to-face dates...I got hooked on the story and I saw myself, like a fan above: watching the show while going around a thousand times...I will miss the long paragraphs of this novel.
This novel is a breath of fresh air in many ways. The grammar’s a ****y bit weaker than some, but that hardly affects the experience. You’ll find that the author, Suiyan, has a fetish for mass releases (don’t think of anything dirty). The story progresses nicely on a slowly quickening rate. From the first few chapters to the latest, you’ll always find tidbits to enhance your knowledge on what the core plot is. Does he have to reach the peak of the world? Save his loved one? Save his race? Extend his life span enough to not die? The answer is: Yes. Like I said, it’s a breath of fresh air, and the same goes for the characters. You don’t have that faultless main character that never does bad, or commits mass genocide and goes “I won’t let the world walk over me” or something of the like. Here, our MC, Krune is genuinely good, not from his character description, but rather his actions. While he comes of as a little wimpy, character development that sees him taking on new, and the cliched shameless trait exist. But, this only enhances the comedy, ‘cause the Novel is easily top three in comedy. The side characters, while kinda generic at the beginning, diversify in their characters later on. This, also, is a plus. For world background, you have a literal multiverse and a higher realm, but the plot never feels like it’s larger than its current setting. To me, that would mean that if he’s in a village, you could get knowledge on the cities, but the readers don’t immediately focus on what happens after he leaves the village, but rather the village itself. I’m not entirely sure what constitutes an amazing background, but I think it’s good enough if it’s there and doesn’t overshadow the foreground before it’s the main focus. Nonetheless, the world is expansive with the author not only expanding on it based on size/location but also based on how the people’s views change in the different parts. Or at the very least confirming that it won’t just be a cliche “go to city, go to competition, go to school, offend big guy run away, find something useful, repeat steps one to five with a ‘capital state’ rather than ‘city’, goes back to city and floor the big guy before we forget about him.” Krune is not the type that lets conflict dictate his worldview. All in all, it’s a great, kinda lighthearted read. I love it. Hope you try it if you’re reading this.
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wtf, why is this sh.t rated 4+? I never called anything sh.t. but this is one, and explaining why I did so would be describing sh.t and deducting why this is worse that real life sh.t as it may be used as biofuel. Author gathered some curated cliches. then did a speed run with it. so it's now a gushing diarrhea.