With just 14 chapters you can't expect me to give a good summary of pros and cons so early. Though I would say, it started great and I liked the MC's cheat power. I had read the author's other work, and I know if he is serious in continuing this book, it will be a great work. Though a little confused on how instead of skills ,etc, the first dragon has strength and weakness. Also please increase the chapter release count without reducing chapters length, as without a high release count, I have seen other great works to go down in ranking .Please don't drop the novel.
why is this novel not popular come on it's so good I was not expecting much due to its low views but it's a hidden gem
Quite an interesting story, transitioning from the murim to a fantasy world. I really like it! Keep up the great work.
A 5 star riview...and all the 3 powerstones... please post just one more chapter......
Hi!I'm the guy who is writing this and yeah I'm gonna give myself five stars because why not?Anyways I would really appreciate it if you could read my book and gimme some feedback, the more feedback I get the better I can get with my writing skillsThanks a lotIkaris
Hello, I'm the author of Veiled Horizoufeffns and i just want to make this creation of mine to be shared in this platform, i know that this book won't be like the other novels/stories that are well-known and well structured i know that my story has many flaws and if you see something that needs to be changed or give me some advice I'm very thankful to whoever does that, anyways if you happen to stumble in this novel please check it out and if it did not suit your taste then feel free to drop it. Thank you.
The story is captivating, an ideal webnovel for fans of the harem genre, topped with an evil and overpowered main character. So far, the narrative is progressing nicely and shows great potential. Well done.
Read the book. its not bad for a new writer.
Start is awesome. Hoping this story will not disappoint the readers
IT is soo amazing....Novel is good story outlie is fabulous and mind blowing but why is it so underrated...webnovel should have taken it up on front....
Do you really have to keep the name Axel? It sounds odd when you read like Axel Lin? wth? Either use a full English name or a full Chinese name.
I must say this is an amazing novel some things here and there could be better(Example: Lake having to play the playboy character that his sister designed for him and him breaking things off with Evelyn. Even if you don't want her to be the female lead at least make them friends or something with no romance on both sides.). But overall, this is one of my favourite novels. Other than the upper points I mentions the characters,plot,system and world is amazing. I hope if you can take take my suggestion into consideration and PLEASEEE post more chapters.