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I personally really love this, soo much that I've read it all in a matter of hours. This is such a nice refreshing story from all the generic and cliche story developments and outcomes that come with this type of genre. I hope the author keeps developing this novel amazingly and can't wait to see more stories to be written by you in the future, if there will be any.
i like the story however i think the mc could be better written he has some good moments however he is usually just as bad and treats even people who are nice to him badly. then about the pricing later on is between 15 - 20 coins i think it's pretty pricey considering most stories have 10 - 12 coins per chapter. despite everything i just said i still recommend the story it has its good moments i love world the story takes place in and think everyone should try reading it regardless of what i said
oh man. .. .its quite good. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. ... it has potential to develop even further. ... day updates might ruin it though. .. .
I never stopped reading from start to finish! Chapter 1-60, I enjoyed every single one! I hope that this novel is picked and continued instead of the other copy and paste novels that fill this site!
Not many sport story can hook me. So congrats. Not only that, i never saw a basketball story so it is a plus. However, the writing quality suck, but its ok since it is yours first time so i cant go hard on you. story development is ok but still can be improve and i cant say anything about world background since u use real earth as the background. All in all, for a first story by new writer, u have good idea for the story and this make up with ur poor writing. i wish you luck.
I'm so happy someone picked up this novel I'm even more happy I found it ?I'd recommend reading both the original and this.It's essentially gourmet of another world but for wine.
