I loved reading this, so refreshing and full of memorable characters, best of luck . I want to go deeper into it and best wishes for it .
One of the best action story that cuts across the world. This is the best clandestine operation stories. You better get your copy and read soon. Enjoy
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Gila keren banget ceritanya benaran dibuat sangat baik, sampai ada peta yang menjelaskan, buat ceritanya jadi lebih hidup. ceritanya sangat bagus. i like it
so far the story is good. It reminds me of Harry Potter, with all the magic and creatures. The story development is good, there is always something, whether it be a new spell or scenario and it has a bit of mystery too with all the weird magic and families. I just hope that the story remains revolved around the bookstore.In the end the story has a lot of potential and if you liked Harry Potter than this is the story for you
Giving this story a five star review second time because the author has captivated me through the story Chole. The search for the truth, how she died and what happened in her life. Every chapter excited me to read it more. The introduction of new characters was very well explained by the author. I love Ken's character so much after Chloe. Well, the author has marvellous writing style. The author has succeeded in giving all the emotions, the feelings, the world in the story. I really want readers to read this work. Believe me you won't be able to let it go from your library and mind. Thank you so much author for creating this story.
Decent stuff so far but I'm not sure the system he received is all that great, comparatively.I'm also hoping for some character development, for example we find out that he had a family that got killed at one point so finding out about this or how it happened during some introspective moment.Also, so far, there's a stat in the system that just hasn't really been explained yet, his 'learning ability' stuff so it isn't really even relevant atm.
The story is great! But the updation is not consistent. it would be great if the story is updated Daily consistently. Also, a very short chapters.
I couldnt continue reading, it was awful. I stopped at chapter 4, maybe it improves later? So far with what I've read, it was all about describing luxury items and money. It felt shallow and vain, there wasn't a lot of thought, emotion or drive in the character. He was simply buying things and describing his purchases. Supporting characters had even less personality, women were only ever beautiful and not much else, other guys were just obstacles to gain more skills from. Did he even have friends? I think its enjoyable if you like to live thru the character for that kind of life Im guessing. As for me, it was just too shallow but it wasnt badly written. I did enjoy the writing style but Im definitely not reading more of this.
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