Is thia good?
Deb
C292 such bullshit! despite his shitloads of advantage , to think he will have a hard time against one opponent. i know the author wants to make it interesting but it doesn't make sense at all. why gave him advantage so much advantage in equips and skillpoints as well as titles if he barely wins on one notable opponent. Even his damage and his opponents difference is barely 500 points.
Well this is surely an interesting SYPNOSIS which caught my
Wow! ? a very detailed narration and with emotions! I can see and feel what the MC struggles with. And I can very much like the premise. MC is hardworking and likable which gives touch to its craft. All in all, a good first pov! It will find success nonetheless [img=recommend]
Quite interesting to be honest. I don't really have anything to complain about except some few typos and grammatical errors here and there, but hey... it didn't ruin the immersion for me so it's fine. Besides, I like where the story is going as of the latest chapter.
story is good I like it just mc is little bit too cowardly but everything is OK but I don't know whether this novel is dropped or no so if author if you are reading this just reply it I kinda liked it to read so peace???
awesome .
I tried to justify giving this more stars, but i can't bring myself to. I will detail on this below.The quality of the writing is very poor, with words that are misstyped and mismatched that ruin the context.Characters don't stay in character and move from one attitude to the next, without any justification for the transition.The dialogues are poorly matched to the atmosphere and toopic, often using formal speech poorly, thus ruining the immersion. There are decent things as well, such as the world building, the theme and relationships, but too many things were copied from Culti online that it does not seem original.Same MC name, Same dragon name, Similar physique, same power system so far. It's just hard to apreciate something unoriginal that seems like a cheap copy.Coming back to the bad points, this novel could use a full rewrite and edit. Too many mistakes to recover by this point.
Okay the grammar is really good, the story starts really well. The character is good but I do hope he will be more dragon then human, just a more advanced mind for now. The update stability is good but I need way more. Much about the world background isn't known for now
I wished i could have read this novel. it had a great premise as far as novel junk food is concerned. The translator however did such a horrible job that i had to give up inconsistencies left and right.
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