Familiar face

this is one of the best novels I have read, I bow to you sir handsome fatty. This novel truly has monarchic levels of potential on the level of grasping evil and legend of the great sage.

Chapter 573...i liked the novel i read 500 chapters in 2 days doing nothing else...but this getting ridiculous now.Why is he always fighting? Just because its a cultivation novel u cant keep him in danger all the time and no it doesnt make the story more exciting it makes it draining on the reader. U need to have a few good chapters with story in them in between acting as a buffer. But here the guy just keeps fighting from 1 place to another..and always so pathetically weak? When is he actually going to get strong? At the last chapter when the novel ends?

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its a great story although some of the details is left out and needed to be rewrite but otherwise the plot is good the mc is great just hoping he can be a magician as well

Hi my precious readers :) Although this is just a hobby, can I ask for your reviews? I mean, can I know if am I doing good? Or is my story sounds corny or a little cliche? I need criticisms since I am thinking of pursuing a writing career by publishing a book on amazon, thanks a lot though :)

The MC ruined it for me. He is a skirt chasing otaku in simple terms. Which is fine if it was executed well and didn't influence his choices.