is this dropped?
this look like the
Ch313, I like where this is going
It has good potential, a cohesive and very fluid story, which doesn't give the impression that the author is pushing the protagonist.
It's worth reading.
"Hello everyone,
I'm Enigma_Elysium, the author, and I'm thrilled to introduce you to my book.
It's a journey through realms of mystery and discovery, where every page invites you deeper into a world of imagination.
Join me as we unravel the enigmas, mysteries, and horrors together!"
Yes, I did give myself a shameless 5-star review to boost my book.
- If you have any questions about the book, I will try to answer it.
This is a return gift from this junior to the senior. I haven't gotten enough time to read this precious work of yours yet, but I have been enlightened by your previous novel "The lustful young master is sinister".
By the way, I really liked the synopsis. It's really thought out thoroughly.
Straight into my library. The novel is very good.
World building : Although not much world background is shown, two prologue chapters, the origin of the system, and a little bit of information about Gaia, are sufficient to demonstrate that the author has sufficient background to write the story.
Cain (MC): Mc can be defined as someone who is good to those who are good to him, bad to those who are bad to him or cross his moral line, and indifferent to the remaining ones. I especially like how he doesn't differentiate between male and female enemies and gets straight to kill. He is a reincarnator with sealed memories, but that isn't the main focus. He is resolute and smart and not naive and wimpy.
System: No major help. It doesn't reward him with any experience or anything. No subspace. No shop, etc. Until now, the system has served as a guide rather than a spoon feeder. It can change because various modules of the system are still locked.
Side characters: There are no major side characters till now except Levi, so I can't comment.
Writing quality: English is my second language, so even if the quality is bad, I wouldn't know
Updating speed: 4 chapters/week is not enough for me. At least 1 chapter per day should be the goal. But that is entirely up to the author.
Overall, a good novel with a great potentials. Kudos to the author.
this is a pretty well written story, the cheats, the world background, characters and all but sadly the MC is too much of a goody two-shoes busybody who could get OP fast but instead has to be all Mr righteous. as at chapter 700, there are multiple chicks that want the MC but he's like i can't protect them so not yet and yet he has a secret realm all to himself. it's a really nice story though but i don't like the righteousness. I mean, prior to his 'reincarnation' he was a contracted killer who supposedly killed for good. he's understandably overprotective but his righteousness is too much for me. Other than our conflicting ideologies, everyone should read this
The First Chapters have some mistakes, please read more as the next chapters will get better and better.
Author, I have to say, I grasped what the basic idea of your novel is from he first two chapters, not even three, just two. Usually, it takes four to five, but yours proved to be 'different from other books.' I don't have any feedback to give you, except to wish you good luck in participating :)
Wow an amazing work! I loved it a lot. With more updates, this sure will be a blast! Keep updating and you will surely find success. Good luck!
This novel is written in a entertaining way.But that is the only positive thing I can say about it. It is garbage in any other way.Whole premise is insane and the execution is horrible.Stats have no context or comparison, so they are needlessly wasting time and space. Logically any motivated action would reduce motivation but the MC is completely unaffected. Stats only have an impact when it is convenient for the plot.If the MC had more experience or mental maturity than an ape he could avoid at least 90 percent of the plot.Typical I have been reborn without my brain syndrome.Side characters like the MCs family are even more oblivious and stupid than the avarage family in transmigration novels.Spare yourself the brain bleach.