So far I like it you said you didn’t know where you’re going with this I hope my comment is helpful
This book is incredible, I discovered it while browsing the app and it's promising. ??
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I came to this story after getting invested in its manhwa. As a newer light novel reader, I thought this story was overall really engaging. I can't wait for the newer chapters to release!
Author, if you are easily dissatisfied it is okay since imagination can't be helped but please make sure to be consistent in one story even though you get a dead-end each time.
hey author will this novel have any romance or friendship or any sort of poison.
The premise is nice and interesting but the dialogue and how it's written sounds stiff and awkward. reminds me of AI stories but I'm not very certain about that. The author also tends to state the obvious and it's done over and over which makes the dialogues very awkward to read.Like there's this OP potion he's got and he says it's good if he uses it right but there might be greater rewards if he donates it? like bro you literally have a charity system that gives you 25x what you give out. why is this even a question?
everything was pretty good since I love scheming protagonists, the way he built his empire was explained, the way he used his technology knowledge, and really I liked the way the author built his story but then, this Ricky guy was introduced when it's completely unnecessary, and then instead of getting rid of him, the author drags out the matter involving him, like how? the MC has AIs capable of spying,detecting, hacking anything on earth at that point, they control the satellite outside the orbit but couldn't catch the rebels, and then the story drags out again, the Ricky guy acts as if the MC is his nemesis and all while the MC doesn't even know him, I mean he appeared out of nowhere with his goal of eradicating the devil, dear respected author, do you know that we readers ( well most of us) hate it when the story keep getting dragged out unnecessarily ?like every time the MC gets an update, and goes into a coma, something happens that he'll have to resolve when he wakes up, the ai ends up being completely useless at the moment, and it has happened 2 times already.I think it's because Mr author is making more challenges for the MC or he wants to make the Ricky guy a major antagonist but he's the author so he knows his story more than me.i just wanted to point out a few things that's all. otherwise the story is pretty good and maybe I'm just impatient.and also thanks for all the hardwork mister author!
Good story that made me want to continue read it until finish. Good plot that made me not feel boring. ??
"It's been a long night. I think it is time we make our leave," my father said arising from the table and gathering his belongings.
"What do I want to create? You better prepare the materials for my masterpiece." With a grinning smile Dark said.
I love the story. From the very first chapter, it has been endearing, and so captivating to read. It's very a interesting one to read. It's more like love gone bad????