This novel is interesting. The writing quality could improve but it doesn’t bother me too much. The story development hasn’t really gone anywhere as of yet but it’s only been six chapters. The character design is interesting, the world building isn’t different but that’s because it’s the real world.
Overall this book has room for improvement and I’d suggest grammerly for little mistakes though it’s a very good read?
Excellent writing structures and usage of grammar. Everything is very detailed, which is to my liking. Apart from stability of chapters published, everything is great. Keep up the good work!
It's actually kind of my first time reading from a male perspective. It was very fascinating. I actually re-checked the genre of this novel and it was contemporary romance. The author has my respect for doing male-centered romance novel—those are very rare here. Author-sama has a very intriguing way to structure the sentences and paragraphs—which I loved the freshness of it.Note: I was so happy reading until I noticed I do not have coins.. T_TOverall, beautifully done!!!
nice plot .... great chara.. .. . perfect world setting . .. it makes me wanna read and keep read ???? good job author . .. will always wait for the next chap ??
The writing is good, but a little cliche as it follows the much-used ‘Chosen One’ trope. The story is also a little too fast-paced. Also, I find the mother a little naive (or at the maximum a little schizophrenic).