Overall, it is good. I like the slow yet intriguing start. The relationship dynamics between Lily and Leo are very endearing. Could have been better with cliff hangers.
Well rounded fleshing out of main character. The concept is fresh and the authors unique touch to the creatures and affinities bring a fresh touch to beast taming that is quite enjoyable so far. Keep it up!
It is a beautiful novel with a coherent plot and well-structured events. I highly recommend reading it as it is different and gives you a warm, family-like atmosphere, unlike other novels. not the way to mastering ; true effort is what really matters.
Read up to chapter 28 so far it’s a good book but need some polishing you have a lot of repeat paragraphs and not everything needs a description example main character says something and next sentence is low but sharp tone. I would get it if it was every once in a while but it’s after every conversation there’s no need for that
The dorm was that large? the mcs attitude changed a lot
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Your concept is really impressive! The ideas you’ve introduced are innovative and engaging, creating a solid foundation with great potential. Keep pushing forward with this direction—your hard work and creativity are definitely paying off. Looking forward to seeing how it continues to evolve!
This novel is a blend of fantasy and romance packaged with action and drama. It's something I've always wanted to write and can finally do so. Thank you for picking it up. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I have had writing it.
nice story work and script for the book when I read
beared with it till ch 95, it was a hot piece of garbage
Interesting few chapters. Good job author!
nice read...keep up the good work AUTHOR & and all my power stones are yours to take...