I like the story and the first chapter that I read. it is recommended. the only thing that does not suit my taste is that each paragraph is long. (it is just my preference.) just need to to separate it.
how you all edit these books thumbnail ?, I am also preety good in these but i always get confused like how should do, am I doing good, etc! btw book cover is ? great
I am having a good time reading this book. thanks author for the wonderful world you are creating.
Ok it's a good time for new review when your volume 1 ended. You do amazing progress I never thought you will do. Characters feel more interesting and story even if nothing special happened is going in very good direction. I'm waiting for more and thanks for vol 1 man
Still in the initial stages, but show potential. The battles are well described and the world building is slowly developing through the chapters.
reward . .
Yoooooo its the talentless excuse of an author here! Even though this is my first novel and I might cringe in the future when I look back at this but for now I would say it is still somewhat good for someone first novel...Soooo can you please give me a chace? anyways thxs if you are reading my novel ;D
have 4 phases of life, just like
"Opzzzz ... I can feel the presence of supernatural beings in you."
"Pfft ... yeah it's a pretty funny joke right Doc."
Issei, Gohan, Kiba, Gasper and even Azazel who decided to join them all got into the massive steamy bath and almost immediately felt their muscles and joints seem to relax within seconds.
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