Sorry to everyone who has read Northern snow 40 chapters first, it seems like it is a little different then his 40 chapters but it still follows the same storyline. But if you are new welcome! this is a novel I am translating since I find it great and want more people to see it and hopefully inspire some to write these kind of sci-fi stories because it's pretty hard to find stories similar to these, I'm not gonna give it 5 stars because I myself feel like the story does have some problems in the writing which really translate horribly over, and I also don't feel like using all my free time every day translating chapters so it is gonna be a little slow with the releases. also the max chapters I can release for this story is 1.8k since I will need to pay more for the rest of the story on faloo and I'm a broke college student
I love this! You have created such a great world and characters. I love that your curse is not simple and how haunting the visual is. Keep up the great writing!
its really good definitely gonna keep reading hopefully you don't drop it and finish it and start releasing 1 or 2 chapters a day ???????
Good world building and story development, mc is not a Simp and he possess a functional brain luckily to us readers.Mc personality is ruthless, efficient and cold so you don't need to hold your head in frustration because he gives treasures to enemies, random girls or doing stupid things like normal protagonists. Read it, you don't going to waste time.
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This is a potential hidden gem as long as it is not dropped. Doesn't look like a power fantasy of a psychopath like a lot of other novels or boring. Grammer is good characters are well written and story flow is also good.
I read all the free chapters through force. I didn't get hooked. Not my cup of tea.You can read. Average novel.Doctor, doctor, would you rather tell me how much you measured out, how much you put in, how much more do I need to see the sunrises? Doctor, how long do I have to live?
it's good but it's filled with lot of nonsense like who cares about future generations thats the first thing he thinks about?he hasn't even become a master level and is a weakling but still recklessly attracting attention iron Beast now he even wants to evolve green worm public he does realize that he is only able to compete because of this special evolution methods and skills and he is just agrees to increase others profiency in skills it's kind of a wonder and unrealistic that he hasnt been targeted by people after causing so many commotion and he says he doesn't like to be popular? lot of unnecessary things have been added and name of growth level and others keep changing and confusing why not just stick with one? and being famous only mostly bought him unnecessary trouble and is not really that useful he didn't really receive much benefits for giving evolution methods isnt it better to keep it private and sell on his own instead?
well, the mc is just basically clueless of how strong he is. and the others dont tell him cause theyre misunderstainf everything. wonder when will the mc realized hes so strong? it can get really old really fast.
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The premise is well thought of and the characters emotions are portrayed in a genuine way.Aside from some minor grammatical errors, this is a gem in the making.Well done and write on.