The novel is very interesting and very different, a great read to get out of the same cliché (despite having its clichés... cough young master cough). The criticism is that the author gets a lot lost talking about things out of the context of the moment, character and scene, things like people working and the place where she is working (which adds nothing and consumes 1 chapter, if not many).
I'm up to date on raws and it's pretty good, at least much higher quality than the usual sewage we get. Unfortunately, this story is a slowburn. The worldbuilding is interesting, the characters are fleshed out but each small arc takes about 150 chapters. Hopefully by chapter 1000 the first big arc will be completed and MC will get out of novice village. I recommend voting and adding this to your libraries.
the item level is a bit messy, for example the god grade item's should have more stronger effects because it's already at the pinnacle but no, it only look's like a gold equipment for me.
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A HUGE Shame that this was not chosen Webnovel should be ashamed of themselves for not picking this novel. There completely fine chosing trash but when something good comes along once in a blue moon there like "Nah were good."
Great idea for a book, Especially the reason for the behavior of the orcs. I hope there will be more detailed dialogues with other races (In one of the chapters after thanks from .... they disappeared from the book) I also hope you will change his Chinese name to orcish
One star for obviously not having several novels (lol) like Reverend Insanity, but seriously tho the amount of propaganda that will be here would outmatch anything you will ever see.
im not good at reviewing, but here i go. okay, this is a really good read. the MC is very well written, and I love the system in here. I also like how truck-kun was left out, and he's just in the real world with it to help him along. please, anyone reading this, go read the story, you'll like it too.
The story is easy to read and is detailed when characters or graphic scenes are concerned. You won't be disappointed once reading. ??????????????
Mediocre at best, seems like a newbie writerShort chapters with little or useless information which makes them boring, chapters 26-35 can be shortened and edited to 1 or 2 chapters.Cheat could be explained better and the whole cultivation system is still unclear, until now talents were only people from influencial families that received lots of resources. MC seems gutsy or ignorant, being so weak, but acting all mighty with fmc that is a few major realms higher.Usual face slapping, but done in a poor manner, starting from mc being uderstimated and badmouthed then he does something amazing and everyone is shocked to the core, but still continue to look down on him and hope that he will fail...
This is a great read. New concept. Great plotting skills. Immersive narration and creative use of powers.P.S. If I was the mc I would have asked the best use of the power.