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If you really want to read the next chap and you can bear to read some Machne Translated novel, Read the MTL ver, my friend
I'm in the first chap and I felt he was stupid. He should've signed the agreement to save Alice first then get revenge later.
Could this mc be any more obliviously full of himself? (I have a secret system that makes my life a wiki walkthrough, let's make things harder for people who actually have to do things the hard way!) Chapped lip cock sucker.....
This is so chaotic o.o
sensational
exciting content top notch
I love the story so far can you please make it more lively and entertaining, i hope the main charater will have to reveal his true identity soon but before that let him show his family that he is worth
it was great at start (atleast till 100th chap) and i don't really about if it is farming or not but then it suddenly did a twist and started to become horrible like the author even forgot that some of the scenes even happened . after 100 th episode his strength is varying like crazy like sometimes he can kill an peak epic grade in head on fight and then sometimes he is only a little stronger than legendary grade 1. and people even seem to forget he can kill a epic grade and thought he was arrogant to challenge a legendary grade when clearly legendary grade is lower than epic and as once said that the gap in strength is huge. and it was said that epic grade are at the top just after sanctuary grade but a random guy ( bully ) just came and author just declared that his stats were equal to some epic grade expert (and he was just a black gold grade 6) . it was just nuts
Bro, I was reading this on a whim, but when I started, I couldn't stop, so please don't stop either
The story is a good one and I love the premise, I binge read over 50 chapters cus I like the story so much. The only thing I got to complain about is that for some reason it became some unreadable garbage, I don’t know if this is a mobile glitch or what but I can’t read it no longer.
1. The writing is all done in the present tense for some odd reason, and is not very good.2. The story is slow. You could read 40 chapters, and only a few days has passed.The story so far (140 chapters in) focuses on the MC in the academy. It is a powerful contender to Harry Potter, I would say, in terms of hour it grabs your interest in the lore. But, the slowness and the dragging of events as well as the bad writing plays to its detriment. It feels the MC won’t finish year 1 of school until we hit chapter 900.
YOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW BUTUANON KA BOSS?
Okay, Here's a review, so far I have read three chapters and this is what I think, the writing quality is A bit mid, but I like the little world you create in my head, I like the way you started it when he was young telling a story to his daughter. Good. But so far, I haven't heard of any world changing threat yet. Maybe I'll see later on, but it should come early.
