It's good i recommend to try it ☺️.The only thing that I don't like is the family situation, i would prefer if ch 29 doesn't exist, so that mc just grow stronger by himself and eventually cut connection with his family.Other than that everything is good ??
My review is only based on the few chapters, so it should be taken with a grain of salt.The story is slowly developing, pushing us to know more about each characters motivation and drive; to know the lore of the world and know exactly how powers change society.While most of it is incomplete, it still shows great promise.
Hidden Gem ? for Historical and Kingdom Building lovers
What a hidden gem. I love the characters and all their interactions especially between Caelum and Lunar, and it’s alos fun to see how prideful Caelum can be. Story is pretty interesting, although it does feel like its slowing down a lot more. The author’s writing style flows and is well structured, but sometimes they focus on specific details too much and because of that there are moments where it feels stale and like filler, pacing of the story seems pretty good so far. One thing is that sometimes Lunara seems too well adjusted and experienced with civilized society for someone who had never experienced it before. Another thing that kind of confuses me is the power scaling as well although that may just be due to the small number of characters we’ve been introduced to. Again though, the author has outdone themself with the writing of the characters, their interactions, and influence on the world, it all seems very realistic and that makes it immersive. One thing is that the world seems very small but that may just be due to the lack of places we’ve seen and lore revealed to us just yet. Looking forward to more, keep it up author!
As an unbiased reader, I can say that this is my second favorite novel. Number one would, of course, be: ERROR content not found by the genius author Noguide.
good book will definitely continue to read this book..can be recommended to friends
This novel is fantastic. I advise you to read it and give your personal opinion. I personally read them and I am satisfied with them. Enjoy your reading.
This story has some good pacing so far, and the introduction of the characters is going well. Long as it keeps the pace up, introduces the characters properly, and the world building comes together as it is now, it will turn out to be a pretty good novel series.
Pretty good.
I really like this novel look interesting and promising can you update ⏩⏩⏩⏩⏩
you need to develop your writing quality and arrange your ideas ? to make a full story and good world background .. and you need to change the mentality of the villain and make his plans more villainous and more understandable
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