The author's creativity and imaginative skills are at par. The writer thoughts are well projected and the plot itself is intriguing. The language too was easy and there wasn't much hassle in understanding. The background and character design was vivid. I feel the chapters are a bit shorter and the cover can be a little interesting.Overall, it's an interesting novel to read.
The story setting is really fun but it's a typical novel of this type. The MC doesn't have to put in any effort to learn to create cards, just automatically being able to 'tell' the best way to make them. And, of course, recipe's come just as naturally to him as breathing. No build-up or effort means no satisfaction from the result, which means you might as well remove the crafting part of the setting and just make it action.Character's don't act like people, and they don't interact like people. Conversations are stilted and unnatural with a lot of author self-inserts that cause the conversations to jump from one point to another. The way they communicate is really hard to stomach. It gives me second-hand embarrassment. It just makes it impossible to be engaged with the story.It's unfortunate. I love crafting stories. But this isn't a crafting story. If the author reads this, this would be a good story if you made the crafting something the MC worked towards consistently over the story's timeline and you improved the way characters interact and communicate. Those are the two points that are really dragging the story down.
Hi I like your book because it has good context and the way you right is good and it seems like you know what you are writing and I wish you carry one writing thanks.
Interesting build up stories from the Beginning until the latest chapter also the alternate Alex also amazed me in many ways hopefully to see more of this
Every main character who live this is living in some kind of paradise that I'm to much in hell to understand.
Excellent story so far. I love the inclusion of polygamy into the story as I am so tired of seeing a harem where the MC doesn’t actually marry any of the women. So thank you so much for including actual wives for the MC in your story. Keep up the great work. Can’t wait to read more.
All in all, it's a great story.It has a good story, and I haven't found any big flaws.It has great characters with realistic personalities, many times better than you would expect from a novel here on Webnovel...The translation is spot on and I have not found any obvious grammatical errors, nor have I seen any awkward wordings (although I'm not a native English speaker). I am certainly recommending this novel.Review as of Chapter 18.
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The author has barely put any effort into this novel. The MC doesn’t even show the intelligence of a child. He doesn’t cover up his tracks and gets in trouble. Uses dogs as expendables in a strategy that doesn’t make any sense at all. Comes up with strategies so stupid that even plot armour fails to keep up. In conclusion, let’s bury this and never speak of it again.
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A good start to a story. It needs more chapters to be a great story. A good plot so far. I like the idea of a orc main character it is a idea that is not often used but has alot of potential to be a really good story.
(Read to chapter 54)1. It’s not exactly the flow of writing that’s a problem it’s more that clearly there’s been a lack of care in the editing and checking of grammar, spelling and punctuation making it not hard per se but irritating to read.2. The story itself seems ok but it also seems quite rushed in some areas and the writing itself doesn’t absorb the reader. There are constant coincidences and plot armout. “You know that girl you had *** with? Turns out she has a special bloodline that means she can become super strong with you so that you can carry on having *** with her and have a superficial relationship!”3. In my opinion, the mc has an unlikeable personality. He’s rash, arrogant and makes impulsive decisions. 4. The world building is pretty lackadaisical in my opinion.By the way, I’ve focused mainly on the negatives simply because they stand out more to me. It’s not terrible but it’s also not very immersive.