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no update today? There's usually a new chapter every day at 6am (for me at least).....
Trash novel. Just one example: the MC is at one point the top martial artist in the world, capable of killing other top martial artists with a wave, stepping in to the sky, taking sword strikes to his body without them leaving a mark, killing werewolves with a single punch, destroying entire military squadrons with missiles and helicopters in moments on his own, typical OP cultivation level powers ... then 100 chapters later he's fighting with ordinary security guards while thinking proudly that his body is strong enough to fight 6 regular people. At some point the author completely forgot that the MC has these magical OP powers and now he's just really good at fighting. Embarassing. Another example: at one point, the MC encounters a man who is road raging at him. A crowd gathers as the guy rages and threatens the MC. The MC slams into him, killing him in plain view of the gathered crowd, then causally drives away to go shopping. This incident is never mentioned again past the end of that chapter: in the next chapter we're on to jade gambling with no mention of the prior events. The MC doesn't think about it, the woman with him doesn't say anything or have any reaction, and the cops never investigate the killing. This novel is trash.
Good, I would recommend it!
The concept of the story is pretty good. However, there are many grammar and wording issues in every chapter. There is also a lack of consistency and realism. A character can't be made out to be disgusted and terrified of a dead animal and then be an experienced hunter who is used to breaking such animals down. It also doesn't make sense to be capable of dissecting and breaking down an animal with no tools whatsoever.
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I think this is an amazing story. The world background is amazing. The character development is slow and steady and the original character design is really good too. There's almost no grammar mistakes so it's pretty easy to read. [Also, Jeff deserves a chance-]
Generally a good novel. The system is unique and not super op. I like how it gives common items that are turned special instead of tons of op skills. Also its a nice calming peaceful story written well.
Disappointing Trash Novel.... I never rated novels because I thought even if I don’t enjoy it there may be readers who like it and I don’t want to make them feel bad but seeing this novel make me change my mind... The author can’t even write the synopsis right !!!!!Thought it was a cool female lead storybefore but I got a trash Male lead who canonly slaps randomly ...So disappointing.This novel looks like author just mixed everything he thought it will be interesting to the face slapping genre just to earn a quick buck..
same genre that I like where mc is serious and not after building a harem.seems to start with the plot about martial arts and mages so looking forward to new updates.
While vampire stories are not my favorite or even prefered genre, the story is quite good and very intriguing. There are some small granmar issues and the dialogue sometimes feels forced and unnatural. But its nothing granmarly cant fix. The flow of the story is really good and I can already imagine the epic adventure about to happen!
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