I need to talk about the hospital scene because my heart cannot handle it. An Li is already walking funny from last night's... activities... and Duan Zhuo insists on taking her. She tries to escape through the BACK DOOR. A BACK DOOR. Like she's some kind of fugitive. And he's just sitting there in his bright blue sports car like 'I knew you'd take the back door, so I've been waiting here.' This man has prepared for this exact scenario. He had a LOUDSPEAKER in his car. A LOUDSPEAKER. Who carries a loudspeaker around?? But then the REAL chaos happens when they're at the hospital. An Li is trying to tell the doctor about her other injury — you know, the one from being absolutely ravaged — and she can barely get the words out. 'I-I also have another place... that feels uncomfortable.' The doctor is clearly putting two and two together but An Li is over here dying inside. And then Duan Zhuo says 'Her husband' with such calm confidence that I physically cannot. The doctor's reaction was perfect — just accepting it and giving them medical advice like 'young people, show some restraint.' Meanwhile An Li is sitting there with her face probably matching the color of a tomato. The worst part? The doctor says 'apply it wherever it's swollen' and An Li has to figure out HOW to apply medication to her own... areas. And Duan Zhuo is just there being helpful in the most unhelpful way possible, saying 'let your husband help you with something like this.' I'm not okay. This is the kind of romantic tension that makes you want to throw your phone across the room and then immediately pick it back up to keep reading. The fact that An Li is suffering through all of this while secretly having feelings for the OTHER brother makes it infinitely more painful and delicious.
I always love detective stories. I started reading novel by reading Hardy Boys and 3 Detective Series during my school days! Brought back my memories! Hope to read more! Gonna have fun reading!
you started on the 19th and your already going at full pace we love this can't wait to see what more ideas you got coming for us
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A powerful and suspenseful story! The author has created an intense atmosphere that makes me feel the emotions of the main character. The way he is dealing with his past, his guilt, and his search for identity is beautifully written. I also love the deep conversations. They make you reflect on life.
Very ass story writing I think you need to learn writing all chatgpt . This was the worst story I ever read. Good starting but nothing about charecters
This is nice,I like Alan.And please,we need more chapters .
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100000000000000000000000000000000000000000% recommended i liked it so muchyou can read before you sleep
Although there are only 4 chapters so far, I give what I have read 5 star. I would like to see another 20 or so Chapters asap and will be keen to see where this story goes.
A Powerful Story of Loss, Justice, and Revenge. The writing is vivid, and the emotions feel real. This novel explores deep questions: How far would you go for justice? Can revenge truly heal you? If you enjoy stories about loss, redemption, and second chances, this book is a must-read.
so like me, you also write using the first pov narrative... but this style is only meant for story with a nuance of comedy or to be exact, the English words should be casual and entertaining because the one that is speaking is the characters, not the author. Too much description is also a no no to this style.. why? because if you tell a story yourself, you won't yap about everything you saw right? However the content is interesting,, keep it up!!