Good story and power concept of the beast. I like your writing styles and world building. But maybe you can explain more about MC goals. Keep it up!
It is nice,minding its just the starting. Improvement can be done.Like about some story about what happened on earth after he died.Like what happened to her?.
Easy to understand power system (at least compared to most), and a good read in general. Other than one spot I've noticed, there isnt any chapter duplicates, and its easy to read without giving yourself a headache. very enjoyable.I will say that I do wish it had a bit more to do with actual vampires, as I actually forget that they are vampires at times since no interactions with other races really happen, but hopefully that changes later on. At least the items and the powers seem to keep to the vampire theme mostly. Only other constructive criticism I got for the author is that the powers are a bit hard to follow. For example, when he is killing the lower level vamps, at times ot seems he is doing what seems like an AOE attack but from what powers have been introduced to the reader he doesnt seem to have one of those, so im unsure if its like a natural aura or part of his cultivation or what. Despite the criticism, as my review says I do think up to chapter 59 which is latest chapter for me its a great story and none of the things ive mentioned are even close to a dealbreaker. Nice job, author.
the writing quality is good, I haven't seen any noticeable grammatical error until now. the story holds potential with the mc's race which I shall not spoil and the different skills, for the characters we are only introduced to the mc for now who is fairly intresting and we don't really know much of the wider world but what we have seen is intriguing., the author updates regularly so there's that.
hello thereit's a good start ? keep writing ✍️
It is a nice read.the flow of story is very engaging, and the author is really pushing boundaries in the story ? I like the wordplay, too. but it needs further polishing for easier reading flow.please, keep on weaving this tale.
Hello everyone, it's the author of the book here and I'd love if you give it a try. ?❤️
Concept is good but zero world building, zero character development, rushed story, rushed dialogue. Another story that ‘could have been’ one of the greats on this platform.
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Now!! what can I say? this novel has everything I want to read and I would appreciate it if there would be more novels like this ??
The novel promises an engaging adventure full of unexpected twists, battles against celestial entities and monsters, and the quest for personal redemption. "Celestial speed: Legacy" is a must-read for those who enjoy a mix of thrilling action, complex characters, and a touch of humour.
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