Okay, I like it now that the mc personality is changing
Good story, I enjoyed reading, everything is on point and the way story it’s flowing is amazing the beginning alone it awesome and well lined it I’m looking forward for more I hope it’ll not get axed
The way the author explains more of the novel, makes it more interesting than ever .. more updates author
I read this work and forgot to rate it hahaha, the work is very good as far as I'm following! It has many positive points in it and themes well addressed, I like how there are things shown in a cap that appear in a future chapter shows good continuity :)
I'm gonna fight 'em offA seven nation army couldn't hold me backThey're gonna rip it offTakin' their time right behind my backAnd I'm talkin' to myself at nightBecause I can't forgetBack and forth through my mindBehind a cigaretteAnd the message comin' from my eyesSays, "Leave it alone"Don't wanna hear about itEvery single one's got a story to tellEveryone knows about itFrom the Queen of England to the Hounds of HellAnd if I catch it comin' back my wayI'm gonna serve it to youAnd that ain't what you want to hearBut that's what I'll doAnd the feelin' comin' from my bonesSays, "Find a home"I'm goin' to WichitaFar from this opera forevermoreI'm gonna work the strawMake the sweat drip out of every poreAnd I'm bleedin', and I'm bleedin', and I'm bleedin'Right before the LordAll the words are gonna bleed from meAnd I will think no moreAnd the stains comin' from my bloodTell me, "Go back home"
I like how the author started it! This makes me curious how he would be able to cope himself having broken legs. The author has good writing! This is definitely good to try reading
what an interesting story to read..something ne wand exciting
Hello KJV. Zeanso here writing this Webnovel for WSA so please enjoy this story and support this Original Webnovel of mine.Power stone is heavily appreciated.What to expect from the MC Ragna Kent.1) Leveling Up ability2) Magic Ability3) Time-Based Ability4) Will be OP but still needs to develop5) Fighting Gods Definitely...
l have only read the first chapter but it's promising
თქვენი დედწბი მოიდღბას სუყვალასი რომ.უფასოდ არ აკეთებთ ამას თქვე ნაბილაზვრები .რამდენი ხანი უნდა ველოდო თქრგმნას რატო შეიყეთ ვერ გავიგე რა იყო მართლა და მართლა
There are minor spelling mistakes, but those don't bother me that much. Overall, it's a good read.
This is definitely some novel that you guys should check out. A plus point for the sci-fi references, and a gripping MC to boot. Writing - its actually pretty good and I like the immense vocabulary of the author for coming up with the best possible words to weave into his sentences and paragraphs. There were little to no grammar pet peeves, which gave me a really pleasant read. I should also mention the mad imagination of this author and his knack for naming things and characters. The Benedictus? I love how it sounds tbhCharacters - they feel raw and engaging, and its great to get a glimpse of their personalities as the story progresses. Its good to know that Alex isn't overbearing like I thought he would be - he's a naughty mofo incognito despite his killer rep, and it was a pleasantly begrudging twist when the truth about Kain was revealed. Overall, I like the depths of the characters. Development - the pace is really great, and each chapter leaves you wanting for more content, so good job on thatStability - keep it upWorld - this is created an extremely complicated world that requires a lot more vivid imagery and descriptions. There were inconsistencies on this part, but they are hardly noticeable and can be easily corrected too since it was pointed out in some paragraph comments. In conclusion, this is a book you should give a try ?