he can edit but he only did it 4 times he still can edit about 5 more times then he made himself with much potential yet he always goes after other's opportunities that make his talent pointless as if it's only an excuse for the auther to make him powerful cultivation system is messed up, every time he talk about strength he must make feel wrong for example at 7th level divine sea realm he can fight an illumination realm powerhouse yet when on 1sr illumination realm he can only fight a 3rd level one so author wasted the entire world background like that he wasted 2 edit opportunities makeing an elixir work on an cultivation less than it supposedly be taken for example blood cloud powder that can increase cultivation speed by 10 times but can only be take by divine sea realm or above huh when you edit it it becomes can be take by any realm Remember editing must be logical there's no logic here since a strong medicine can brust with much energy for low levels one's to absorb now then instead of editing elixir data why not find a source to get resources ?? why not try to create opportunities that's much better than stealing other's in which you could use these people as followers thus building a power for himself ??
Not bad, actually pretty good. Though it gets slight convoluted later on, its still miles better than other novels. The word building and characters are great.
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i all about romance but I decided to give this book a chance. Okay, what got my attention was the book cover and I proceeded to the synopsis and I told myself. I must read this. Sincerely, the book didn't disappoint me which excite me a lot. A great piece of work and looking forward to more chapters!
Love your work just bought all 890 chapters keep up the good ?
Alright! Here’s my honest review on this story:In the first chapter, the spacing of the paragraphs sentences was horrible. But this gets fixed almost immediately in the chapters after that and I suprisingly didn’t see any flaws after that initial first chapter.I can say the characters seem interesting along with believable interactions in most scenes. Some people might believe the characters to be stupid, but they are just teenagers in the story at the moment. So them being stupid is very normal. Especially in the beginning.Currently, when writing this review, there is only 6 chapters released. Because of that, I haven’t seen enough of the story to know if there’s proper pacing or story development.Also, there needs to be more regular updates. At least for the first 20-30 chapters.This is the end of my honest review.
One of my favoirite books of all tome. Aaron is such a unique character and the author crafted him so well. This is also a psychological genre that'll take you write into our protagonist's head. It's just so authentic. He is in a dark pit of despair, but can he find his light? Find out by clicking that READ!!?
This is one of best Novel.it's well written and storyline is amazing.it's currently one of most popular Novel in china.I suggest you guys read it.MC is likable, World background is amazing,side character good too.
Its.... something. I cant say the novel is horrible, but in several instances the writing quality and ideas behind it leave a lot to be desired. Theres a lot of forced interactions and "humor" that seems like the author is trying to inject into the story, but to me at least it comes off a little forced. The author tries to make the system a mix between helpful and controlling, which ends up feeling weird because its hard to tell if its actually trying to assist the MC, just mess with his life, or force him to follow its agenda. Supposedly, some people came to this novel in promise of romance or sex scenes or whatever, but if thats the case i suggest you look elsewhere as the author skirts around those. Admittedly, im not up to the current chapters so some of these problems may have been fixed later on, but up to chapter 50 at least you'll definitely see many of these issues.
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the start is not that good and the way that knowledge is so hard to get gives supreme magus vibes. The concept of magic in this world is weird in the sense that authorities are governing certain aspects of reality and the magus is only offering raw magic. Nevertheless the infusion of true meaning in specialities makes the novel system that much intriguing. Its fair to say this novel is snowballing in a sense that it only gets better and the writing quality in it self is top notch. I super recomend this and my only time being truly bored was the flashback monotous and extended experience that Evin had while sorting out his memories to the former authority
Obligatory five star review by a shameless author, this is the first time I am writing something without any magic, super powers and systems. I just hope that it doesn't fall flat because I kind of enjoy writing it.