اون داشت با سرعت و حرکات عجیب غریب سمتم می دوید.
"Okay, I'll humor you Audrey." I bite the hot dog. "Mhm, good hot dog. So why is it that I can't remember anything about this huh?"
She had once overheard the head guard talking about how his father had Alzheimer due to old age and could not even remember his name most of the time. She thought that this person in front of her had the same disease since he was struggling to remember what he wanted to say. She reasoned that the pale face was a symptom of the illness.
Mia: While you're at it, get 10 packets for the counter.
"And how old are you?"
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Yeah I really enjoy storyline so far and my only 2 problems are all the negative comments (if you don't like it leave if you're not reading for sex and shenanigans be gone)and the bad grammar like I get missing words or misspellings our brains can actually correct it without us noticing but using 1st 2nd and 3rd person sometimes in the same sentence annoying but still good job with the overall I'm going to continue reading and hope Author will improve as we progress maybe one day go back and fix some for future readers
"No one in their right mind will have a walk in the woods at this hour"
"Retreat, none of you are needed any longer," Barragan's tone was hard, barring no room for misinterpretation.
The depth of this hole is far deeper than a person's height.This is already the third trap that I have dug, hence it is quite easy.
"Admiring the view eh? Oh don't worry soon you'll join the others working towards the name of the Holy Phoenix and Okran himself."
"Good, you better not have," She didn't seem too confident.