it was something I just like his other story way more he stopped updating those just to come back with this not cool.
Wow. I am so glad I came across this book. Beautiful is not enough to describe it. Very well told love story and the narrative is so poetic. The characters are flawed that I am looking forward to their developments. There is smooth flow of the plot and world building. FL is stubborn but strong while the ML is vengeful and cold, with both of them in pain from their entanglements. I like there is a young son in the picture that can play a role in their healing. It’s very unfortunate both have wasted so many years away from each other. Highly recommend this to all romantics. Excellent read. To be honest, the best of the best here! Writing quality ?????Can’t wait for more updates and of course more work from this author. Thank you for sharing your talent ❤️ Sending gift and golden ticket your way. Hope you will get more inspired ??
I don’t recommend reading this novel. Although it started out well, it started going downhill as it contradicts his supposedly high IQ and calculated personality
The story is very fast paced in the best way possible. The story is easy to follow and the mystery abundant on the MC’s orgins and why what happened to his people happened. There are mainy tropes used in the story from stories of the same genre, but I think they are handled well. Some grammar errors but not super noticeable. Can’t wait for more.
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Feel like u downgrade mc way too much. Be it his current “weak” self or his personality. Hope to see more developments character wise
It was an alright read. The story had some interesting parts, and the characters were decent. The pacing was fine and picked up as the revenge plot kicked in. I'm hoping for more kingdom-building elements in the future; personal strength is great, but I'd like to see more focus on his subordinates too
Author paints a good picture with their writing. Hope they write more soon.
I will give it 3 out of 5.The first few chapters are good then mc's personality suddenly changes, from then on there are some good chapters and some bad ones, if the story was written in a serious tone like few first chapters then it would be a gem.
Hello, Author here with a shameless review. Now that I'm approaching 40 chapters, I thought it would be time to drop a review here. First off, thank you so much for taking the time to dive into my story! This is my first time writing an original Webnovel, so there may issues regarding worldbuilding, plot etc. I genuinely didn't realise how hard it was to develop things like worldbuilding without info dumping, lets hope I get better with it in the future. I mentioned this in the synopsis but just to reiterate. there will not be any romance in this story. I learned from writing my fanfic that I'm not built for writing romance. Additionally, the MC is not reincarnated or transmigrated, he's indigenous to the main world in the story. He starts off as a normal kid, so don't expect him to be ruthless and calculative right from the start- that transformation will happen very soon. Also, something I didn't mention in the synopsis is that the story will contain world hopping- i.e. the MC will travel to different worlds over the course of the story. Finally, constructive criticism is of course welcome and encouraged. Once again, thank you for reading my work. I sincerely hope you enjoy the journey!
Seems good so far, We could use more detail on what the world and characters feels/looks like as it breaths. Some writing mistakes are prevalent, but nothing major.
Author this novel is a real diamond the story is getting more and more interesting with every chapter and twist.please don't ever drop this novel I will always support you.Thanks for the novel author ? and keep up the good ? work.