The characters felt super real, and the storyline progressed at a good speed. The chapters were a good length, and the world felt very interesting.
12 chapters in, and it's already filled with drama. I really like how Cammy stands up for herself, and naturally captures the heart of men. Really appreciate the song recos in the beginning, too. Author Shiroi does not disappoint!
this story has a nice setting...every chapter is very interesting..waiting for another tonight...
it's a very good novel so far but I felt like there could've been more done in the beginning it felt rushed when sera was transmitted into the novel she went to the academy right away I wish there was a few chapters in between where maybe she should've met a few of the heroine outside the academy so it didn't feel so repetitive maybe a childhood friend or parents business partner and theres the fact that i felt like most characters in this book had blonde hair or blue eyes for whatever reason nevertheless I look forward to the rest of this story it's not poly right and I look forward to the authors future works
Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?
Hi I'm the writer and I think I could still use a ton of work to make this dream of becoming a writer come true so please leave an honest review for me so I can make this better!
Fun read . love that fl is low-key crazy ?
Hello!As I've reviewed FoL, I'm here to read and review this while waiting for volume 2 ? (Please update FoL). In any case, I feel like you're not used to writing romance? Romance here are usually fast-paced but I can see that you're prioritizing the story progress more or the fantasy element.Considering MYHYS, you also prioritized the story progress first than the relationships between characters. Understandably Cheska is the opposite of Amaranthe. She smiles a lot and is friendly but keeps a safe distance from others, while Amaranthe is initially closed off but more open, i feel like... Um, please give us a proper hint and scene regarding the ML too. There's two male main characters on the characters list and honestly its obvious who will be ML since there are more scenes or highlights with Kaye and Amaranthe together and you can feel their chemistry in a way. But Riverus has no presence yet (but I did love his appearance hoho). That is all, thank you!
Hello, I'm Tyrouge.This is going to be my first original work on this platform and I hope to gain your support, make it an enjoyable read for you.So, If you like it, please send power stones, reviews, comments and if I get a contract, Golden tickets and gifts.If you have any questions regarding the story, please leave them here, I'll reply as soon as I can.
What to say writer I'm impressed with your dedication on uploading the chapters regularly and making the plot engaging and hooking. Keep it up.
This novel is absolutely amazing! Even though there are only a few chapters so far, I'm already in love with it. The characters are perfect, the world-building is immersive, and it all feels so well-crafted. I can already tell it's only going to get better as it progresses. Take your time and enjoy this masterpiece it's worth it!
It is a very impressive story, I'll advise you all read it. The story line is very incredible you all should check it out and I can assure you that you will not regret it